Loneliness Won't Leave Me Alone - Comments

I decided to post the comment here, cause you deserve it :arms: .

I didn't like this story that much. It wasn't because it'd be badly written, though, not at all! quite the opposite, it was so well written it made me hate Andy at first, and then hate Kitten. a lot. because he killed Andy's baby! I wouldn't even mind if he killed his gf, but the baby. that was just... so wrong. I seriously hated him at the end, sick bastard. :grr:

I wanna see the picture you mention at the beginning! D:< it was exactly the time when I just felt so sorry for Kitten, because you just showed his side of the story, how Andy loved him, and how they were happy together and then suddenly, Andy left him. (I;m watching triplets videos, so if I stop making sense, xDDD you need to excuse me. at least you're getting reviews!). I like how Kitten wanted to surprise Andy, come on, Kitten, haven't you seen movies? it never ends well!

Andreas didn't even have to say anything, he had understood it immediately; Andreas would leave him, their promises didn't mean anything anymore. It was the first time Eric had seen Andreas truly surprised, a hint of fear hiding somewhere deep in the blue eyes, realizing that his escape hadn't been as easy as he thought. <= I really like this, cause it shows that Andy is also scared, and you know, not as tough as it might see and as he;s usually showed? kinda, if that makes sense?

The man hadn't even had the decency to tell him face to face. <= and this is where I really hated Andy. :grr: it;s kinda, you know, you'd expect him of all people who would be honest and not just run away? I can't imagine what would happen with band, if it mattered.

I FOUND NEW TRIPLETS VIDEO. :tehe:

*ahem*

anyway, I liked how Kitten didn't cry until Andy left, it sort of showed his maturity *gasp*, and I just loved how Björn took care of him. => Their consideration had got Eric to cry, making Björn feel lost of what to do other than to let his younger friend cry out against his shoulder, comforting him as best as he could. = me aaaawing a lot. I just love when their friendship is mentioned in fics, I don't know why, but I love it so much.

It had confused Eric, not understanding why she was so kind, if knowing who he was, until Eric realized he wasn't the only one Andreas' had lied to. <= still hating Andy. coward. :grr:

I freaking loved the nightstand! the whole idea, it was just so adorable and Kitten-ish, and made me hate Andy a little less, because he kept it. and then as Eric killed her, right after you emphasised she was pregant, then I just started to hate Kitten a lot. and I didn't stop, cause. D:<

I think it was brilliantly written, the last line was like a slap, but I still don't lie the story. :grr:

Holy shit.:shock:
Very intense. When I saw it under deathfic, I thought that Eric or Andreas would die, but I wasn't expecting that. I like that you made it seem more out of pain and love than obsession. I also liked the end when he doesn't leave and he's smiling. Most people would freak out after they come down from that insanity and run.

A few awkward sentences in the beginning and a couple typos but overall very good story and very welll written.

This was sad. You could tell that Eric really loved Andreas--almost in a kind of obsessive way, it seemed. That was definately a good twist towards the end; Eric killing Andreas' girlfriend. It was very unexpected. You did a good job on this :] There was just a few grammatical errors/typos--but no big deal. :]