S is for Steve. - Comments

  • mr. owl

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    First off, let me apologize for taking so long to judge these. :D

    The girl sitting across from me looks like she’s just dying to talk. Okay, not a good joke. Hahaha, this made me laugh. :D

    “Yeah, and aimed it at me.” Ken glared at him.

    “That was the only up-side.” I laughed again.
    So did that. :D

    I really liked how you made him already dead without being completely obvious until the end. You did a great job creating the story. I really enjoyed reading this. :D
    October 12th, 2009 at 11:50pm