October 21st, 2007 at 05:43am
fuuuuuuuck you're good. damn this is as good as headlights. and im already hooked on that one o_o
damn. another one to be eagerly checking every email for an update for : )
i just LOVE your writing style : )
i like the way the paragraphs are split up by the italics.
the way its so blunt
and. god knows how, but at the same time so descriptive
i like the way that theres so much centered around the tiniest bit of storyline
the way its so vivid. you can feel it happening. almost.
but yes. i'll just stfu now. so, ignore the crap comment =]
that was simply amazing.
Not much more i can say about it.
I loved the emotion.
update soon?