Wish You Were Here - Comments

I would definitely read a story based off of this one shot. I think it is a great idea. Loved the way you wrote and described it.

I'm definitely thinking this should be a story.
I really liked it. Oh hell,
I loved it :D
I know what being in a relationship like that is like,
and well, this was awesome

This was really nice... it was kinda touchy to me. I just got out of a relationship and I was feeling the same.

Thank you for writing this. Reading it made me light...

You should definetly make it into a story. :D

Hells yes you should make it into a story. I think that not only me but others would like to kno what happens in the future for Lena and Zacky. :)

I definately think this could be carried on :)
It'd be interesting and I'd sure love to see more as it was an excellent one shot

This was brilliant.
You're such an incredible writter!!
I think this would be an amazing story (:

Carry this on!
I loved it, was amazing

I don't even know how to put it... I loved it! I even cryed a time or two... Okay maybe the whole thing.. Much different from the others you've wrote But still nothing less.
And I agree with the last two comments, You should really carry this out. It would be so worth reading!!

this was amazing
and it could be an introduction to a story

Wow, there are so many outstanding comments that I don't know if I can top this. I think it's not your usual type of story, except for once or twice before, but however, you owned this. You made people relate to the characters, and let me tell you, I don't appreciate that. haha. I hate relating to sadness. haha.

Outstanding job Jinx, You should make a sequel or something. Just an idea.

I mainly agree with everything that was said. Why rephrase it if it was all said before, right?

That was beautiful. That's the only way to describe it.

You are such a phenomenal writer. I love how you can create and build these characters in such real, emotionally engaging ways. I agree with synfulpixie; we, as readers, are involved with them. The raw feeling and pain woven throughout the story is just heart-wrenching.
It doesn't help that I was listening to Stupid Boy while I was reading. The combination of the music and words made me tear up.
I think...well, I know not everyone has been in the same/similar situation, but you've desribed it in such a way to open their eyes and experience the circumstances. I can, unfortunately, relate to Lena so much that it frightens me.

This was just very different. I normally expect hilarity and ridiculous people along with full-blown sex scenes...but this is just awe-inspiring. It just goes to prove how strong of a writer you are, that you're able to not only write those typical styles, but you can do this as well. Well done.

synfulpixie:

Wow. That was outstanding. Not that I expected anything less, but still.

Couldn't have said it better my self :)
Loved it hun :)

This is beautiful. I really liked the sex scene, and I know that sounds pervy (I mean, come on...if you're the Queen of Smut, I'm Peasant of it...I think that metaphor failed, miserably, but it's 2:30 am, so give me a break, lol) but it was just something different from what you usually write. It was less physical and more emotional.

Any inspiration for this?

Wow. That was outstanding. Not that I expected anything less, but still. It really made me think, and there were a couple parts that almost made me cry! I think you should make a story one day about Lena and Zacky meeting again. Whether they left their significant others or not. I just kinda feel involved with them now.

Anyways, bravo on yet another piece of outstanding literary work.