Summer Has Only Just Begun - Comments

Wow. Your description is so amazing and the images you painted in my mind were so vivid. I could almost hear the waves and feel the breeze. Wow. Wow. Wow. Just beautiful. Beautiful is the only word to really describe it. Absolutely beautiful.

These are just mechanics & nothing important since we all make mistakes that most people don't notice but, in case you wanted editing... you have fell instead of feel in paragraph 11 and swirls instead of swirl in the twelfth paragraph. Nothing major honestly, but again... just trying to help you improve.

I absolutely love the imagery and beauty in this entire story. it makes me so sad to think that summer just ended here. I can't wait for it to come back, just so those experiences can happen again. Its so relatable;e, even though our beaches aren't near as amazing as yours are.

Amazing! Well done. The second entry of the contest!