Oh, Emetophobia! - Comments, page 6

helen (415)

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OH MY *insert your favourite musician here*!!!

You sick bastard :mrgreen:! This was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.
So sick & amazing.

You spent the first half describing Frank vomiting - his suffering - and then just said Oh, boy, did Frank Iero hate throwing up.
That made me laugh hard.
Those descriptions were really good, no matter how sick your comparisons and metaphores may be. I think this might be the best intro ever written. Seriously.

Red & beige. I'm never gonna see those colours the same way.
This left a huge impact of me, although I don't suffer from emetophobia. I just don't like throwing up, but when I have to, I do.

Oh and, Showbread

August 31st, 2007 at 05:52am

Bastard Son. (200)

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You pwn me. Seriously.
I was just about to send this story and
everything having to do with it straight to hell.
And then this amazing girl dropped a comment.
I laughed at first.
Now I'm just grateful and smiling.
<3

Oh, and my bread wouldn't do that.

Bloody bastard.

August 31st, 2007 at 05:01am

Collision Kiss. (100)

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Ew, ew, ew, ew, ew!

Okay, now that's out, we can continue.
x].

This is one of the few times I wished that you weren't quite so good at making me feel like I was right next to the main characters in your stories.
Now, please, tell me... how do you manage to even tinge vomiting with beauty?
It was like a ballet of bodily functions.

I have no idea how you do it, but your stories are always, always fabulous =].
I love how you write. Love, love, love <3.

Oh, and I love the background, too. I wanna cut open my bread and have it do that x].

August 31st, 2007 at 04:58am