October 28th, 2007 at 09:44am
Oh my fuck.
I was directed to your story by ^ and it's one of the best decisions of her life sending me here. I can't really remember the last time I was moved by fiction death, but the combination of the use of words and the emotions expressed form that horrible pang in my stomach.
Mikey's emotions. Do you have any idea how much that ripped me apart? I felt so manic and happy before I read this, and don't get me wrong. Although it dampened me down a bit, that's exactly the purpose of your story and, xtyfjhg, it affected me in just the right way. I'm happy, in that sort of melancholic way, and I'm pretty sure that was you every intention so you must be doing something right =)
I hope I haven't rambled too much.
Subscribing so hard.
Seriously, thank you for taking the time to read this and comment.
Sorry, I'm so seriously lacking in the update department. When thing's settle out, I promise this is the first thing on my list =].