Death Not So Forgotten - Comments

  • baysway

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    Ray always makes stories seem much more grounded so I am all for it. :)
    October 17th, 2009 at 08:19am
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    Yay for black text! LOL

    I knew Frank would go and find Gerard. He is so right about Gerard being a bitch. He is just terrible jerking people around. I feel so sorry for Frank. Can't wait for more!
    October 14th, 2009 at 04:24am
  • baysway

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    Poor Frank! That must have been terrible hearing the news from Bob! Can't wait for next update.

    I have to say that the color text was very hard to read.
    October 13th, 2009 at 04:37am
  • baysway

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    LOVED the update. I am so glad we are going to get the dirt on Bob's behavior. I would be absolutely TERRIFIED if I was Gerard and had to go talk to Samantha with Bob's father in there! Scary but still hilarious if you think about the look that must be on Gerard's face.
    October 12th, 2009 at 05:40am
  • baysway

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    Yay! An update!

    Damn! That Bob is one sick puppy. It is really, really, really beyond inappropriate for him to perform sexual acts in front of his sister. He obviously gets off on it but I just do not understand his behavior. I would love some insight as to why Bob does it. Perhaps it is something in his past or just some strange mentality issue. Whatever the reason, I would love to have his point of view on the situation.
    October 9th, 2009 at 06:39pm
  • LouKou

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    this is so good! love the fact gerard is a stripper! please update soon x
    September 24th, 2009 at 12:11am
  • Marilyn Manson.

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    baysway:
    Great updates! I so would have loved to have seen them strutting around in those heals. I want them to get together. I hope it all works out.
    For the record, I have no idea what's going to happen in the end. This is all coming together as it goes, so anything could come next.
    September 23rd, 2009 at 09:03pm
  • baysway

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    Great updates! I so would have loved to have seen them strutting around in those heals. I want them to get together. I hope it all works out.
    September 23rd, 2009 at 06:00am
  • baysway

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    How in the hell can a story that is this good only have one commenter?!? Well, at least now you have two. This story is amazing. Seriously, amazing. I found it a few days ago and it has taken me some time to catch up. I cannot wait for the next chapter. If Gerard is planning to tell Frank that they cannot see each other, it seems pretty mean that he is fooling around with him first. Guess I will have to wait and see what happens.
    September 22nd, 2009 at 09:54pm
  • JustAimee

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    Ray could be one of Frank's friends
    good update, can't wait for your next one!
    September 11th, 2009 at 05:21pm
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    I did not see that one coming
    September 7th, 2009 at 11:53am
  • JustAimee

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    good update, can't wait for your next one!
    September 4th, 2009 at 10:55am
  • JustAimee

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    It's a good first chapter
    I think Gerard should ba a little more easy going with Frank, but first they should get to know each other
    Can't wait for your next update!
    September 2nd, 2009 at 12:58pm