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I knoooooooooow I didn't comment the last update and you can slap me on the wrist for that, but pleeeeeeeeeeeease update this. It's LP, which is epic, and i still don't understand it, and the whole brotherly thing between Ian and Stu makes me physically squee. :7

Sorry I haven't commented yet! I didn't realise you'd updated this.

I really loved the whole idea of ian creeping in and being scared of his mother. :lmfao He's right, mothers have a power no other human does. And the whole thing of when he woke up and remembered :cheese: That'd be freaky. I like that he thought of putting the powder on and then decided it was a stupid idea- it makes him more sort of down to earth as a character, i think when characters just decide to do things and do them it makes them a bit too much like a sim or a robot. :XD

And Mike will totally have Ian's jacket, coz... it's Mike! He's a good guy.
I liked this one a lot, even if you weren't too keen. Look forward to more. :cute:

Interesting new stranger! and she's making sure he's alright. She's either really creepy or his guardian angel. :mrgreen:

I loved the description of his dried-blood covered lip, yum. and also of the 13 year olds chain smoking and drinking ginger beer till the sun comes up, haha!

I'm liking this. From the excerpt you posted on the pimping 'n reccing thread I half expected it to be sappy Ian het :tehe: But it's a lot more interesting than that.
I liked the first sentence. I knew she was drunk. It was one of those short, sharp things, simple but effective in making me want to read on. I wanted to know who was drunk and why Ian was interested.

I don't think Stu is violent like that either, but he could be. The description of Ian's fear of him was really vivid and well done- cos Stu is pretty, ya know, big and scary. :XD
I like that you included "he could drive." I thought that was quite darkly funny. :tehe: And it showed the way Ian thought- all exaggerated and ambitious... but then bringing himself back down to earth all too quickly. Reminds me of the real Ian, really. :XD

I can't decide if Ian took her out of the club and tried to take advantage because he wanted her and he knew she was drunk, or if she's a manipulating, scheming little bitch. Either works.

Oh, and on a shallower note, the banner's gorgeous! Looking forward to more. Don't let this one die, plzthnx. :file: :mrgreen: