Rich Man - Comments

Ew. Okay, that is what I have to say to start off. EW. You know I love youuu. ;) Now onto my real comment!

Would I let him know he was the one I found a challenge in here?
Perfect. Seriously. I love the relationship that is starting to form between her and Patrice. In some twisted way I feel like they're on the same level. (Kind of like me and you minus the romance, y'know? Yeah, you do know, you know me so well loverrrrrr) But anyways, no, I really like the relationship that is starting to form and I told you why.

You know how I don't really enjoy the whole mindfuck thing unless it's done right. AKA, unless its written by you. You're the queen of them and I love this story so much for it. Seriously, you're an amazing writer Rina, I'm ridiculously jealous.

At this, my ears perked. “Yeah, well, you were just helping me. There was no reason to.” My stomach turned. I craned my neck slowly away from him and back to the sky. Was I shamelessly trying to hide my blushing? Yes, yes I was. He was going to go straight for the jugular. But why would he do so? He had no reason to want to take me on unless he saw me as a challenge. He obviously had the lion complex. He sees a target, he's going to go for it regardless of size or reason.

I love it. A lot. Seriously. Patrice is perfect. You write him perfectly. Ugh. <3


And that sent a worried shock up and down my spine that for years I thought I was immune to.

“Don't start thinking I'm going to attack you just yet.”

My eyes widened.

“I'm smart about what I say and when, remember?”

LOVE IT. Oh my God, I think I screamed when I read it. Seriously, if you don't update soon I'm coming to your house with a MONUTAIN LION in tow and we're going to MAKE YOU UPDATE. Sound good? You should feel threatened.

I LOVE YOU WOMAN. <3

"the other half tried their best to figure out if Lucic was going to curb stomp my ass at that very moment or not." <-- FAVORITE! hahaha i laughed out loud because that is my friend's number one threat haha

obviously i still love this story an unbelievable amount. it's very interesting to hear her read people so well, it's so cool. i'd love to have that sort of ability.

i can't wait to see how she is going to use looch in the whole thing, if she even does. then there's ol' bergy. he's just a little devil, ain't he?

wow all your stories are amazing!

i love them so much, especially this one!

update update update.

I seriously don't know how you keep coming up with these amazing ideas...

So this is basically a fantastic story so far.
I'm... slightly confused. I think it's going to be a bergy story? I don't know though since apparently there is no "physical attraction"... although manda loves her some bergs, so i think it's about him.
anyway. I love the idea you have going and I can't wait for more of it (((:

Yes, oh my God, yes! I love mind games, but only when they're done right. (AKA, written by you, queen of the mind games)

Seriously. I love this story so much already. Thank you so much.

Love you.

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FIRST COMMENT. SICK. LOVE YOU.

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