September 29th, 2011 at 01:04pm
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Love this story! Its crazy, and unexpected and that's what I love about it. Update soon, please!? :)April 17th, 2011 at 05:01am
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Last chapter made me laugh so hard !!
Good Job girl =)
The way you wrote Brian is hilarious and so sweet <3
AWESOME ^^
Keep going !January 19th, 2011 at 01:57am -
You see, I have one problem with this story. THERE IS NO CHAPTER THIRTEEN YET! *coughs* >>
Alright back to the point: I ADORE this story and gotta say that: my favorite story if only for the fact that he constantly admits that the age gap does matter beyond the wonderful writing, original story line, and all that jazz.November 12th, 2010 at 07:52am -
can this story get any better? this is the best!October 16th, 2010 at 11:16pm
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this is like a BI-polar story and i love it.
by Bipolar i mean like one minute im holing in tears,[ima sap D:] next im laughing my ass off, then im angry.
But nevertheless[woot big word] its simply amazing, i cant wait for another one.September 9th, 2010 at 04:05am -
love love love
more soonMay 14th, 2010 at 02:02am -
I didn't know you posted a new chapter!!!! i month ago!!!!! I love it still, always will.May 7th, 2010 at 01:21am
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Amazing update! I'm super glad that this was revived! Haha. :)May 2nd, 2010 at 01:55am
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Amazing! I absolutely love this :) and i have to say; MAJOR props to the idea of Brian singing 'Love Me Tender' by Elvis. As a huge Elvis fan, that made me smile from ear to ear, literally.
Anyway...yes; amazing! :D I can't wait to read more!April 16th, 2010 at 05:56am -
Great story!!
Keep up the good work girls!!
Update soon plz!!April 15th, 2010 at 01:27am -
Aw Brian is so crazy...but so in love. More soon, please?April 10th, 2010 at 03:15pm
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cant wait to see what Whitney can do...April 8th, 2010 at 08:46am
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I love this story so much...Brian is always so sweet in person and knowing that this story kind of pays homage to that...
The update is awesome...April 7th, 2010 at 08:47pm -
This was the best thing ever to come home to!April 7th, 2010 at 04:53am
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I really enjoy this story and I just found it today.
Very, very well written.
I can't wait for another chapter.
Update soon. >3April 6th, 2010 at 06:07pm -
what a beautiful update!
I was so excited to see this was update :)
it made my day, no doubt.
I’m such a good liar that once I convinced Johnny that he was Hugh Hefner in a former life. I’m that good… granted the fact Johnny isn’t too sharp.
That was such an awesome line haha.
You can write Brian's character phenomenally!!!
The author's note brought tears to my eyes. I didn't think Jimmy's name would be the next one on the list... :(
RIP Jimmy, we're all missing you terribly...April 6th, 2010 at 04:11pm -
Chapter 12: You left out Michael Jackson in the a/n!April 6th, 2010 at 10:08am
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Wow. I love this story!
I can't wait to read more <3February 5th, 2010 at 04:53am -
This story is great, I love it.December 17th, 2009 at 10:19am
My brother passed away from this horrible disease. He wasn't meant to live past 4 and made it to 16. I never met him. I've never even seen a photo of him. My father has had cancer 4 times, all different sorts. Base of the spine, bowel and liver. This time however it's bone. There's nothing they can do about it but make him comfortable for however long he has left. A few years. I've lost my inspiration to write due to it. But you're making me realize a few things and giving me ideas.
Your story is well written, paced properly and well thought out unlike most who just 'jump in' without thought and you read it thinking 'really?' I've read nearly every one of your stories, this being the last one. Thankyou.
Rod Dalla Volta <3 (Rest In Peace Big Brother)
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