All for the Best - Comments

  • jewellboney

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    Your writing style is the best. This story is unique and I am so hooked on the characters. It is amazing if you will continue to write because you are so talented. I would like to Inform you that NoveIStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html
    April 13th, 2021 at 05:53am
  • jewellboney

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    Your writing style is the best. This story is unique and I am so hooked on the characters. It is amazing if you will continue to write because you are so talented. I would like to Inform you that NoveIStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html
    April 13th, 2021 at 05:52am
  • appaloosa

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    Reading this story was like watching it as in a movie. You made it so I could see everything. I could feel their emotions and see their expressions. Amazing writing!
    January 2nd, 2008 at 06:30am
  • Dreaming.:.:.Still

    Dreaming.:.:.Still (150)

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    Wow. Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow...

    I agree with sinsa. Your writing is like magic. I amone witht he story.

    You need more stories, ad more chapters. And of course mroe poems!!
    December 17th, 2007 at 01:32am
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    Your writing is incredible. When I read a published book, I get pulled into the story, when I enjoy the story that is. Like watching a movie.

    When I read your writing, I am the story. I feel every emotion. I experience every memory. I feel every pain and loss. I leap with happiness during the good times.

    Simply put, Your writing is beyond words.

    This is the challenge of writing. You have to be very emotionally engaged in what you’re doing, or it comes out flat. You can’t fake your way through this - anonymous.

    You overcome that challenge with flying colors. Your writing doesn't come out flat at all. so yeah. Fantastic job.
    December 3rd, 2007 at 01:48am