Stained - Comments

One Shot for One Shot

Just where have you been hiding?!
This piece is just beautifully written and I just can't forgive myself for not noticing this before.

The description of the colors are so vivid; it's easy to relate, really; but what I love the most is the hidden meaning of said colors; those emotions that pour within each color and how each one of them represent something that has been lost, as your character said so, innocence was lost, and so were the colors.

My favorite line has to be this one:
Because when your eyes are stained, there is nothing to keep close, sacred, special.

First, because it is different your portrayal of the color red compared to mine; red, to me, represents anger, as for you represents the transition of your character, from someone innocent and childish, to someone who has lost the hope in the wonders that hide behind the colors.

It's just so beautiful; great job.

One Shot For One Shot!

That was sad. But I really liked it. It was really well written.
I liked how you said that here eyes were stained red. It was different.
Very nice job. :]