September 6th, 2007 at 08:55am
I really liked that.
It was scary how much I could relate to Frank, and how much I was reminded of being anorexic by so many of those phrases... the typical 'safe' foods, the way it ruins everything you ever cared for, the desperation for someone to notice but fear of the same outcome and the constant use of "I'm not hungry". Or in my case "nah, I just ate".
The thing I liked about this was how you never actually used the phrase 'eating disorder' or 'Frank was anorexic'. From the summary, it was obvious what it would be about, but I liked the fact that you never said it outright. This is probably more of a personal pickiness, but I think it would have ruined an otherwise well written story.
Also, I found it quite gripping. I noticed a few typos/spelling errors, but as a rule - it was very well written.
Hell, I even felt nervous when Gerard confronted him. ¬_¬
I love your long comment like whoa.
Thank you so much :]