I really like this story, Del.
The way you write it is really simple, and easy to understand and follow, but at the same time extremely well-written in my opinion. I love the simplicity of the layout, as well; it's easy on the eyes, and green is my favorite color.
I like Billie's character in this, and I have to admit that I was shocked that Adrienne has left him apparently high and dry. I want to know why.
I like Delaney's character, too. She's a solid character with a good personality and a smart head on her shoulders, and I like characters like that. If you decide to continue this, I can't wait to see where it goes.
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December 26th, 2010 at 08:40am