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  • Kiss Me Deadly.

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    I like your stories ^_^
    September 18th, 2011 at 09:23am
  • sydney likes thrust.

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    I love this! I've never been a big Green Day fan, but you just might of changed my mind! (;
    June 20th, 2011 at 03:17pm
  • DesmondTiny

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    Wow story is prerty good :) :P Will have to continue reading now :)
    June 19th, 2011 at 07:19pm
  • Dahnie

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    I'm on chapter six now, and Cassie is a selfish little bitch, ain't she?
    June 18th, 2011 at 04:59pm
  • X_GreenDayfanatic_X

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    Oh my goodness. What an awesome cliffhanger!! I love this story! It's very different from the other Green Day stories and I enjoy that! Can't wait for an update! :)
    June 16th, 2011 at 10:58pm
  • sweetchildofgreen

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    Please update soon! i love this story and i secretly hope billie does get back 'friends' with Cassie:(!
    June 15th, 2011 at 09:05pm
  • megamann

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    good update :) I can't wait to see if she marries Tre or not!!!
    June 9th, 2011 at 05:26pm
  • Lasting Corruption

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    AHHHHHHH THAT'S NOT FAIR. WHAT DOES SHE SAY-insert interrobang here-

    I love how even after her epiphany, she still has that little nagging voice in her head. It leaves the reader wondering whether it was truly an epiphany or not. I love cliffhangers. :D
    June 8th, 2011 at 11:38pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    gah, as soon as things got good, Adie had to be a bitch :(
    UPDATE ASAP :D
    April 4th, 2011 at 05:10pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    ugh noooo :[ just when things get good friggin cliffhanger >:(
    i need more, i missed this story <3
    December 7th, 2010 at 01:00am
  • BreakTheSilence

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    Uh oh, here comes trouble
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    December 6th, 2010 at 05:37pm
  • outtahereyall

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    the problem with me is that I hate to leave half assed reviews, and i was a bit intimidated by twenty chapters, xD

    i think that mentioning in the first chapter who everyone was in Green Day was a bit off. I think if we're reading this, we probably know who all everyone is, right? Anyways, Tre's infatuation with Cassie is adorable and just seems to fit his personality. It just makes me smile :D

    Mike and BJ's arguemnt is something that I'd imagine bands that have been around as long as them would think about. It's lovely and realistic. However, the sentimentality of Tre and Billie Joe's talk about their kids is something that I bet dads on tour do have to face, since they don't see them as much.

    With Cassie and Billie Joe it makes me curious. Is she pregnant? Did they fuck and are keeping it secret? It's interesting, and I'll have to get back to it when it's not midnight here.

    Nice work so far, though :D
    December 6th, 2010 at 06:04am
  • alexander bernadotte

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    I have so admit that I'm not a fan of fanfics at all, but y'know, there's always one in the bunch that I end up liking very much. And it's this one. It doesn't come off as a fanfic at all; it comes off as an original, cute story, though I've never read a story about a waitress, haha! Anyways, I really, really like this. I love the details in it and I can relate to the characters a bit, even though I sometimes have no idea who is who in fanfics. x]
    This is truly adorable so far (:
    December 6th, 2010 at 05:36am
  • Bottled Hollywood

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    I only read the first chapter, but this seems like a good story. Your dialogue flowed nicely and your layout was simple but lovely.
    December 6th, 2010 at 04:00am
  • purple haze.

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    Ah Green Day fan fiction!
    I haven't read any in a long time, but I thought you wrote this well! It instantly reminded me of the band, I thought you got it spot on to how I recall the way each member acts.
    I loved your descriptions, you used really uncommon but amazing words that fit in perfectly with the story.
    Great Job <3
    December 2nd, 2010 at 08:40am
  • BreakTheSilence

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    Can't wait to see what happens!
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    October 4th, 2010 at 10:46pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    shit fuck man :[ u was hoping this to go a different way but its still good :)
    UPDATE!!
    September 26th, 2010 at 10:02pm
  • Lasting Corruption

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    Oh shit. Cassie is SCREWED. SCREWED, I TELL YOU. I can't wait to see how this is all going to go down. I enjoyed the update!
    September 24th, 2010 at 03:50am
  • jpninja

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    Whoa O.o this is a good story! Poor Billie...
    July 30th, 2010 at 03:31pm
  • Ishaa

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    I'm excited <33
    July 6th, 2010 at 07:28am