Oh my goodness. What an awesome cliffhanger!! I love this story! It's very different from the other Green Day stories and I enjoy that! Can't wait for an update! :)
AHHHHHHH THAT'S NOT FAIR. WHAT DOES SHE SAY-insert interrobang here-
I love how even after her epiphany, she still has that little nagging voice in her head. It leaves the reader wondering whether it was truly an epiphany or not. I love cliffhangers. :D
the problem with me is that I hate to leave half assed reviews, and i was a bit intimidated by twenty chapters, xD
i think that mentioning in the first chapter who everyone was in Green Day was a bit off. I think if we're reading this, we probably know who all everyone is, right? Anyways, Tre's infatuation with Cassie is adorable and just seems to fit his personality. It just makes me smile :D
Mike and BJ's arguemnt is something that I'd imagine bands that have been around as long as them would think about. It's lovely and realistic. However, the sentimentality of Tre and Billie Joe's talk about their kids is something that I bet dads on tour do have to face, since they don't see them as much.
With Cassie and Billie Joe it makes me curious. Is she pregnant? Did they fuck and are keeping it secret? It's interesting, and I'll have to get back to it when it's not midnight here.
I have so admit that I'm not a fan of fanfics at all, but y'know, there's always one in the bunch that I end up liking very much. And it's this one. It doesn't come off as a fanfic at all; it comes off as an original, cute story, though I've never read a story about a waitress, haha! Anyways, I really, really like this. I love the details in it and I can relate to the characters a bit, even though I sometimes have no idea who is who in fanfics. x] This is truly adorable so far (:
Ah Green Day fan fiction! I haven't read any in a long time, but I thought you wrote this well! It instantly reminded me of the band, I thought you got it spot on to how I recall the way each member acts. I loved your descriptions, you used really uncommon but amazing words that fit in perfectly with the story. Great Job <3