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  • scute

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    I'm actually squealing as I read this because I'M 20, so I'm pretending this this is actually my life and my name is Amanda......
    June 7th, 2013 at 08:18am
  • cognitive-dissonance

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    :) I know I am extremely late but I recently stumbled upon this story,It was lovely! Very sweet and different, btw this was my first Bergeron story.I liked how smooth Amanda was when they first met,now that takes some skill!Very descriptive as always and I am in the process of reading all your stories (creeper mode)! Haha have a good weekend!
    December 10th, 2011 at 10:18pm
  • unbrokennn

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    This is seriously my favorite fanfiction EVER. I've read it three times and ugh I LOVE IT SO MUCH.
    November 8th, 2011 at 08:50pm
  • mully17

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    More more more more that is all lol
    June 18th, 2011 at 09:59am
  • pineapple55

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    uh so i just read this entire story. it was awesome. and it's 3:12 a.m. so it's time for me to go to sleep
    May 15th, 2011 at 09:12am
  • reneeanne

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    <3 I am in love with Patrice. That was sooo amazing :)
    January 1st, 2011 at 01:29pm
  • schennsational;

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    I still love this story more than anything, jussayin'
    September 13th, 2010 at 01:32pm
  • schennsational;

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    It's the end! First, I just want to say how sad that makes me... it feels like you've been writing for like 5 weeks not 8 months. But anyways, secondly, I just want to thank you for writing this for me. Seriously, one of the best birthday presents I ever could have gotten. This story has been everything and more, I love it so much. It is PERFECT. So thanks for that, Lyss. <3

    “That’s my girl,” he added, pressing his lips to hers. When he pulled away, he looked down at her outfit, raising an eyebrow at how adorable she looked all bundled up with her pig tails and pink cheeks and nose, tinged that way from the cold. “You look like a snow bunny,” Patrice laughed, his deep voice sounding in Amanda’s ears as he wrapped his arms around her shivering body, something she hadn’t noticed before. Whether it was from the weather, where she was, or a combination of the both, she loved the feeling of Patrice’s arms around her, keeping her warm. She always did.

    “I cannot believe I’m on the Red Sox locker room…” She said into his chest.

    Patrice laughed, “Want to take pictures?”


    That bit gave me hardcore butterflies! akdhfkjshdfs. Why, oh why, is he SO perfect?

    “I love you,” he said, breaking the silence, making her grin. “I can’t believe it’s already been eight months.”

    MORE BUTTERFLIES. kajhdfjs. Seriously. Perfect.

    Gawd. Perfect ending to the perfect story. I love it but I'm so :( at the same time! Sad to see it end but I loved it.. thank you SO much. Seriously, everything I could have hoped for and more. I love it and you so thank you, thank you, thank you! <3
    June 9th, 2010 at 05:02am
  • the smitten kitten;

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    Okay NOOW its done.

    I thought the ending was super sweet, it would have been reallly cute if he had proposed to her, I kind of was expecting him too, I mean taking her back to those seats, and just sitting there reminicising about everything that happened--It was suuuch a cute story though

    I reallly enjoyed reading it and I'm sad to see it come to an end.
    it was fantastic, you're really talented.
    June 9th, 2010 at 03:51am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Loved it
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    June 8th, 2010 at 09:49pm
  • Jessica;

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    Aww, I'm gonna miss this.
    I like that things kind of came full circle with them ending up right where they met.
    :]
    June 8th, 2010 at 08:23pm
  • There She Goes.

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    aww that was really adorable! (:
    sad to see it end!
    i love this story. :)
    June 8th, 2010 at 08:09pm
  • Multi Colored Ranger

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    Awwwe!! That was super cute! I loved it so much! I can't believe it's over!
    June 8th, 2010 at 06:02pm
  • thisafterlife

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    okay, i'm sorry it took me this long to comment, you know that we were involved in some important conversations and this kinda got lost in the background, and your work should never be put there again <3

    this was such an amazing, passionate love story that always left me yearning for more even though i have never really been quite the bergy fan. that's why your writing is so amazing, in my opinion; you have the ability to take players that some people may dislike with a burning passion and make them see the beauty behind the team that they may play for. that's a rarity in this fandom, especially here on mibba, and i'm so thankful that i have the chance to read your things. you make everything so real, i know i've said this a hundred times, but it's a quality that i envy because the way you use your words makes it seem so present, so current and up to date that it's hard to remember these things never happened, that's it's all fiction and in our world instead of the real one. amanda is damn lucky to have this written for her.

    thank you so much for writing this amazing story, alyssa. i can't wait to see what you've got for your upcoming stories; every update is you improving and growing and becoming better, and i didn't ever think that was possible. <3 ily, lyssie.yeah, that only works with evan, huh? LMFAO
    June 8th, 2010 at 10:51am
  • mully17

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    As a Philly fan lol ouch.

    But wow can't believe its over, you should so do a sequel of the next 8 months haha. Oh well if you start any new stories make sure to send me the links! I love reading your stories
    June 8th, 2010 at 09:18am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    aw that was such a sweet ending!
    I'm so bummed it's over but I loved it!
    June 8th, 2010 at 08:03am
  • There She Goes.

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    glad everything is going well for them!
    sad to see this will be ending soon. :|
    cant wait for your new stories! :)
    May 29th, 2010 at 08:20pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    cute chapter as usual! loved it!
    so sad the next one is the last! :(
    May 28th, 2010 at 04:05am
  • Jessica;

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    Aww cute.
    I'm glad Xmas went well for them.
    And I think the gift was perfect.
    I'm sad this is ending, though.
    :/
    May 27th, 2010 at 08:29pm
  • the smitten kitten;

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    What??
    Its over??
    ITS DOOONE??

    WELL THEN.
    I was hoping you were just gunna go 'jk ima write this forever.'

    Anyways.

    The ending was really really reaaaaaalllllyy sweeet., SO cute.

    What a wonderful story!
    LOVED it.
    every chapter
    every word.
    Breath taking.
    May 27th, 2010 at 06:08pm