Gasp! No comments? *takes comment virginity* There we go. (is probably going to be late now >.>)
Oh, wow, this was awesome. If you didn't get a A on this in your class than something is wrong... well unless it's for punctuation because my teachers always fail me for that >.> It was really well written. The words seemed to flow perfectly. One thing that bugged me though is that it's an over used killer story, but for so odd reason it was attractive and pleasing. Good job. :]
*takes comment virginity*
There we go. (is probably going to be late now >.>)
Oh, wow, this was awesome. If you didn't get a A on this in your class than something is wrong... well unless it's for punctuation because my teachers always fail me for that >.>
It was really well written. The words seemed to flow perfectly.
One thing that bugged me though is that it's an over used killer story, but for so odd reason it was attractive and pleasing. Good job. :]