I'll Be Right Beside You - Comments

  • lynne1988

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    Ew.

    Michael the sneaky snake is going to New York too?

    FUCK THAT.

    Like, seriously, he was so rude talking about how her marriage is going to fail. I would have decked him in the face. I'm serious. Maybe I'd have gotten fired, BUT WHO CARES, I'D BE LEAVING THERE ANYWAYS.

    "Don't go."

    Ohhhh snap. If he had said that to me, I wouldn't go.

    And, I knew this wasn't going to go over well. And no offense to anyone who agrees with Evelyn's decision, but I'm on Ben's side. All the way.

    Jussayin'.
    April 23rd, 2010 at 03:45am
  • lynne1988

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    Awe, I like that they had a going away party for her. That was nice =)

    Oh GAWD. Everyone's freaking bawling. (But awe, I forgot how cute Nik and Phoebe were.)

    But seriously, way to make it all emotional. EVEN BURISH, HAHAHAHAHA.

    "but instead wore only dress pants and a light grey button up, the sleeves rolled to his elbows." = HOT.

    “I love you,” He repeated, but Evelyn looked away and frowned. She had heard the sadness in his voice, and it made her feel absolutely terrible that she had been the one to cause it. Ben Eager should never have such a sad tone to his voice. It wasn’t right. And, his wife had been the one to make him so hurt, and there was nothing she could do to fix it, except for staying with him Chicago.

    DAMN STRAIGHT.

    Fuck. New. York.
    April 23rd, 2010 at 03:33am
  • lynne1988

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    HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY.

    Alright. So. Chapter 19 is where I left off.

    Ughhhh. I had forgotten that this story had gotten to the Hawks/Wings series. Blaaaaaaaaah.

    “Oh,” one of the guys said, glancing at the large diamond rings on her left hand, something he had failed to notice before. Sorry.”

    I hate men sometimes. Skeezy men who probably DID notice the ring and just didn't care about.

    ("I have a boyfriend." "...I have a goldfish. "What?" "Oh I'm sorry; I thought we were talking about things that didn't matter.")

    “Did those creeps leave you alone?”

    “They were afraid to look at me after that, Ben.”

    “Then my job was done.”

    “You’re such a caveman sometimes.”


    Caveman.

    And I liked her "We can have sex now," after she calmed down. Lmfaooo.

    I think I'll just leave three separate comments instead of trying to jam it all in one. =)
    April 23rd, 2010 at 03:14am
  • Leah...

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    HOW?!? HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT? D:
    It was sad. D:
    And im reading this on Valentines Day. D:
    February 14th, 2010 at 08:35pm
  • thisafterlife

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    i just have like, five words for you:

    YOU'D BETTER POST MIBTM SOON.

    i loved this story and dammit, that fight at the end teared me up and i don't want it to end like this so this is why you need to post soon and i need to get my ass in gear and make you a banner.

    ilyhard <3
    February 12th, 2010 at 07:01am
  • caniaccowgirl

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    So, I want to apologize for taking SO LONG to comment. This chapter really struck something within me because I think what is so amzing about your writing is you'd uncanny ability to make readers feel how thecharacters feel. I'm sitting here crying because Evelyn is crying, yet feeling the same way Ben does. I just feel so bittersweet about everything. Overall, I felt that for literary purposes, the ending if this was great. It was perfect for keeping that level of uncertainty in us readers. It's like a mini cliffhanger! I cannot wait for Make It Back To Me. I'm seriously CHOMPING AT THE BIT (haha). Im So excited!!! Anyway, I loved this and I'm so excited to see where Mibba's Hottest Couple goes! Ugh. Fighting to stay awake. It's so late.
    February 11th, 2010 at 06:38am
  • Rylie_

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    Alittle late there Benny Boy!!! She's getting ready to leave and he tells her don't go. Umm what? I'd be a mess if that happened to me. The way you ended it makes me ten times more excited to read the third part.
    February 10th, 2010 at 01:02pm
  • sukiedancer21

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    You ended it with a fight??? I seriously did not see that one coming. Wow, its so sad. Her new life with a long distance relationship, and he picks a fight. I hate to think this is some serious foreshadowing.

    Cant wait for the Tri-quel (Is that what its called?) Haha. =)
    February 10th, 2010 at 12:55pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I cant believe she just left like that!
    February 10th, 2010 at 09:39am
  • DemonSeed

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    wwhhhhaaaaat?! nooooo!!! hedidntmeanittttttt!
    ugh, i though michael was finished.
    i miss them already :( START THE NEXT ONE! POST IT!!!
    February 10th, 2010 at 01:44am
  • rockstaar.

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    dklajfladkjf i knew ben wouldn't end up actually taking it well.. but he can't have expected her to just stay! and Michael is going to NYC too?! This can only spell trouble, am I right?
    Fuck off, douchebag, she's got Ben Eager....
    ....well, i hope, still, at any rate.
    This was a great ending and I can't wait til the next one!
    February 9th, 2010 at 10:39pm
  • mully17

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    Holy shit what an end to that
    February 9th, 2010 at 07:48am
  • Multi Colored Ranger

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    Oh my goshhh. That was an intense chapter. :O Ahh, they have to stay together!
    February 9th, 2010 at 04:44am
  • dyana.22

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    nooooo.
    but at least there is a 3rd installment
    February 9th, 2010 at 04:30am
  • Renee Says;

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    Okay, One. I hate whenthey fight.
    Two. I hate NYC. :)
    three. POST THE FIRST CHAPTER TO THE NEXT STORY. :)
    Four. Even though they are fighting I still loved the chapter.
    February 9th, 2010 at 03:27am
  • life.in.technicolor

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    sooo did not expect them to end up fighting before she left....and Micheal going to New York too? really?.... Can't wait for part three to start!
    February 9th, 2010 at 03:17am
  • broken sticks

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    Ughdfsajklf. I knew it. I knew you would do something like that! You love to add drama and you ended that with the most drama you could possibly think of! Dang it Lyss. Oh how convenient that that Michael dude is moving to New York too. That just makes it worse because you know that he's gonna make a move on her because he's being all Mr. Negativity about her and Ben. *sigh* I kind of expected the sadness by the besties and all that and an office party at work but ugh Michael! Can I smack him? Really? He needs to back the fuck off. Or his face will be smashed (I'll voluntarily smash his face if Ben doesn't haha). And then the end.

    Man... as soon as I read that I facepalmed. Not gonna lie. Ben was being all supportive because had had to be... he had to show her that he was and she was supposed to make the decision that she can't go. But she's going and he doesn't want her too. She was supposed to change her mind -- in a perfect world yes... but you're not supposed to make Big Ben all upset. Dang it. Like yes, she should go for herself but cause she's married... I guess she has to take it into consideration about what he feels too. They both have to do that. Just ugh.

    Excellent story wifey. Excellent. Your drama has sucked in a hundred or so people... kudos to you haha. I'm looking forward to the next installment :) <3
    February 9th, 2010 at 02:13am
  • CaptainSerious

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    Also, MICHAEL NEEDS TO GET BEAT UP BY BEN.
    Ugh, that stupid suit. D<

    You know I love it! <3
    February 9th, 2010 at 01:48am
  • CaptainSerious

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    I'm blubbering. I know you said it would have to end badly to keep going but OMFG. My heart is broken. Please hurry with the new story?
    I'm going to drown my sorrows in Monster now. <3
    February 9th, 2010 at 01:47am
  • Jessica;

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    Wtf, Michael is going to NY too?
    I don't like him!
    He's so pushy and all, we belong together.
    Uh no, bro, back off.
    And dammit, I had a feeling Ben would wait till the last minute to say something.
    But those were terrible terms to leave on.
    I hope they work it out, although I guess that's why there's a part 3.
    And Michael better stay away.
    Can't wait for more!
    <333
    February 9th, 2010 at 01:22am