I'll Be Right Beside You - Comments

THIRD STORY!!!!!
If you end this story I will bet you money that you're gonna get a lot of fans being disapppointed.
Including me. I love Ben and Evelyn. :]]

Third story!!!!!! Please!!!!

I would feel like something was missing if there wasn't a third story. I've grown to love the stories of Ben and Evelyn.

I laughed so hard when Ben scared the shit out of this guys. That is something he would so do!!

Woooow I thought I commented. Fail. My apologies lady :)

That part with the little boy was adorable and an interesting way to turn the tension between the two of them into something positive. Aw that little boy charming Evelyn -- such a cutie. Talks of childrens would bring the two of them out of their funk. I like how you did that an unique and happy way to make it happy times.

And then it's your drama. The letter. Now I feel for both of them -- he just wanted her to be honest with him and explain and she just wants to see if she can do it. Now would that have been so difficult to do? No. But ughhh you. You and your complicated situations. I knew an argument about that was coming but not to that magnitude.

Ugh. Like yes I want her to go and see if she achieve her goal and get a better job and not feel so dependent on Ben buuuut I can also see why he doesn't want her to go -- he's afraid to lose her to the City and to her new life basically being a student again and being around people with similar interests.

You better make this a happy ending lady. Cause I did see that you are ending this soon... it better be happy!

Oops didn't mean to post that twice!!

It's going to be interesting to see how Ben copes with her in NYC!! Can't wait to see what happens! Sorry about not commenting sooner, I was in a rush when I read the chapter!! Hope this is the 20th comment! LOL don't you love twitter! Haha

It's going to be interesting to see how Ben copes with her in NYC!! Can't wait to see what happens! Sorry about not commenting sooner, I was in a rush when I read the chapter!! Hope this is the 20th comment! LOL don't you love twitter! Haha

It's going to be interesting to see how Ben copes with her in NYC!! Can't wait to see what happens! Sorry about not commenting sooner, I was in a rush when I read the chapter!! Hope this is the 20th comment! LOL don't you love twitter! Haha

I'm kinda happy to see she's going to NY. Ben took her saying she's going alot better than I thought he would.

She's pregnant! All the foreshadowing with James and stuff, I'm calling it now. Gah! Foreshadowing is so evil but creatve at the same time.

Can't wait for more :)

love it

I liked it alot! I can't believe she's going to New York!

Dammit.
I knew she was going to go.
I mean, it's a great opportunity.
I just wish it wouldn't mess things up.
But, I'm sure it will.
Drama.
More soon. <3

I can't believe she's going to New York.
Well, I can, because I understand that it's her dream and it's true, if she doesn't go for it now, she could end up resenting that decision and Ben and we all wouldn't want that to happen.
But, she's going to New York =(
I did like the amazingly adorable moment that happened before that with the little boy.
So cute.
Anyways, more soon!

i smell dramaaaa

She's going to New York?!? That must of been a hard choice to make
I would defs not be able to leave a guy like Ben...way too hard.
So some foreshadowing...hmmm gets me thinking about what could happen.
Can't wait for more! =]

There's no way I could move away from my husband...cant wait to see how things turn out!

So, you know how sometimes I sub for the two year olds class at the school? Well Idk if I ever told you about this one girl, but she's my UBER-FAVORITE. She walks in every day, deepens her voice and yells:

"I'M HEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRE!"

And then she rips open her jacket and is like "LOOK AT MY MONKAY SHIRT" because yes, she wears a different monkey shirt every. single. day.

She is so amazing. SO AMAZING. She's half white, half asian, and has a bob haircut. A BOB HAIRCUT. Anyways, the part where James was like "YOU'RE MY FAVORITE!" right in Ben's face reminded me of her. Lmfao.

Also, when I have babies, I am doing what Ben's doing and my hubby can do all the "technical" stuff. Unless of course I go with my mother's wishes and marry Kaner, in which case even though it'd be his responsibility to do the technical stuff I wouldn't blame him if he got someone else to do it, because we all know he'd probably be a fail at it. Then he can grab a beer with me and we can watch our kids do stupid stuff together.

I quite like that scenario, actually.

ANYWAYS, I'm not even going to touch the New York thing, because we talk about it all the time and nothing new is said.

Also, in the beginning, you said "hospital" and I think you meant airport. Unless it's one of those newfangled airport hospitals. I heard those are fancy.

Okay, the James thing was so precious.
He would be so great with kids.... hmmmmmmmm? foreshadowing, eh? ;)
And I can't believe she's going to New York!
And I can't believe that this WON'T change anything...
wonderful, as always.
more soon?

Yay! They made up.
I swear my heart melted when James and Ben were like talking.
If only every man was that sweet and nice when it came to kids. :)
amazing update.
But all the way to NY!?
I hope she hates It then comes back to Ben.:)

If I was married I don't think I could move that far away from my husband. But I can't wait to see what the future holds for the two of them :)

EVELYN SHOULD BE BENNY BOY'S BABY MAMA. Just sayin'. This chapter. Wowza. In the beginning, I loved how there was no dialogue between the two of them, just talking with their eyes and expressions. Love it. Its really my favorite type of communication. I love to talk, but its best when someone knows exactly what you're thinking and what you are trying to tell them.

I mean, I literally did the now infamous LEAH SQUEAL with the whole James part. Seriously. SERIOUSLY. Ben needs to be a babydaddy right now. I vote that Evelyn just stays home and has ten Ben kids and call it a life. Yeah... okay, well, no. I mean I GUESS she should go follow her dream and whatnot, but I hope she just comes running back to Ben, or maybe he should get FICTIONALLY traded to the Rangers or something? No, that'd jinx him, wouldn't it?

THIS:“What technical stuff?” She laughed. “Dirty diapers, vomit, feeding, when they get sick, and when they get older and hurt themselves? That’s all my job?”

“Basically,” He said, his eyes still on the road, but she could see him smirking wide.

“You’re an ass.”

“I know.” I loved that. A lot. So much. Times a bunch. I LOLd.

I'm really glad that Evelyn and Ben had a little chat about the whole situation. I can't wait for the next chapter. This one had everything in it that I love: sarcasm, cuteness, and seriousness. I'm excited to see what happens next. :)