Ok well first I didn't think I would get to read it all but I thought it was superb. I shall make a list for you because I think that would be best. 1. I commend you on your stellar grammar and spelling! 2. I love the ethereal(sp?) feeling and quality of your story. Even though it was modern I felt like a knight was going to pop out of no where at any minute. 3. You use paragraphs!!! I rarely see that and it is lovely! 4. I like how you made it long but no boring, that was highly commendable. It is not easy to hold a reader's attention for SIX whole chapters!! 5. So it has been proved, 700 word count is POSSIBLE!!! Who knew? Tee hee so cookies for that. 6. I loved how you made that story your own, you modernized it but you changed it to. It was JUST modern. It was unique! 7. Alrighty welll I liked the light heartedness of most of the story, it was cheery even though this can be such a sad fairytale at times!
Ok that's all for now but it was stuendous! winners will be announced when everyone hands in a story, or! October 25 ish.
1. I commend you on your stellar grammar and spelling!
2. I love the ethereal(sp?) feeling and quality of your story. Even though it was modern I felt like a knight was going to pop out of no where at any minute.
3. You use paragraphs!!! I rarely see that and it is lovely!
4. I like how you made it long but no boring, that was highly commendable. It is not easy to hold a reader's attention for SIX whole chapters!!
5. So it has been proved, 700 word count is POSSIBLE!!! Who knew? Tee hee so cookies for that.
6. I loved how you made that story your own, you modernized it but you changed it to. It was JUST modern. It was unique!
7. Alrighty welll I liked the light heartedness of most of the story, it was cheery even though this can be such a sad fairytale at times!
Ok that's all for now but it was stuendous! winners will be announced when everyone hands in a story, or! October 25 ish.
Kudos! And keep writing ! <3