Well, day-um! You weren't kidding when you said that your story was going to be long! But that's a good thing, because I really didn't want it to end! I mean, hello? Suarez as a doctor??! Shit son, I want him on Grey's Anatomy, then I would actually tune in every week for that! But the aside, I'm really amazed at the plot line you picked for this, I loved that you made her hero a doctor, instead of like the best friend or boyfriend and whatnot. Definitely made the plot line a lot more original, and I loved that. Also, thank you for not picking leukemia! Seriously, not trying to be disrespectful, but leukemia is often the cancer of choice, so I was so happy when you picked a different one, and I loved that it also made her feel guilt because she had done it to herself, which was a very realistic thing to do, and made her more human to me, instead of just a character in words. And their relationship. My gosh, it was beautiful. My favourite part was most definitely the last few lines of dialogue, it made me grin all cheesy-like, it was so beautiful. And I have to admit, I'm glad you didn't kill her off! You know I'm a sucker for happy endings, so it would've killed me if you had killed Sallie! This was amazing, and so freaking long! You should be real proud of this! Well done, and good luck!
I mean, hello? Suarez as a doctor??! Shit son, I want him on Grey's Anatomy, then I would actually tune in every week for that! But the aside, I'm really amazed at the plot line you picked for this, I loved that you made her hero a doctor, instead of like the best friend or boyfriend and whatnot. Definitely made the plot line a lot more original, and I loved that.
Also, thank you for not picking leukemia! Seriously, not trying to be disrespectful, but leukemia is often the cancer of choice, so I was so happy when you picked a different one, and I loved that it also made her feel guilt because she had done it to herself, which was a very realistic thing to do, and made her more human to me, instead of just a character in words.
And their relationship. My gosh, it was beautiful. My favourite part was most definitely the last few lines of dialogue, it made me grin all cheesy-like, it was so beautiful.
And I have to admit, I'm glad you didn't kill her off! You know I'm a sucker for happy endings, so it would've killed me if you had killed Sallie!
This was amazing, and so freaking long! You should be real proud of this! Well done, and good luck!