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  • ThunderKat

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    ahhhh your stories are amazing!!!
    I got soo frustrated with Gerard in the beginning! I was so sucked into the story that every chapter I was like "NOOO OMG TELL FRANK ALREADY!" haha.

    Anyway you are a fabulous writer and i just wanted you to know that!
    :D
    June 3rd, 2013 at 06:42am
  • m--c--r

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    er ma god why must you make good stories that i must read 24/7 and get no sleep!
    February 5th, 2013 at 12:20am
  • ThereIsNoThrone

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    You have yet again amazed me with your fablous writing skills. ;)
    July 8th, 2011 at 10:10am
  • michaelryanpritchard

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    oh my gawd. THIS WAS AMAZING.

    i have my little moments where i create my own little "after the story ends" stories and i believe this one will be an amazing after story.. i won't post it or anything..it's just my little hobby.. (:

    anyway..i read both of those in a week and i love them. my favorite character is probably tash or bert..which is rare because in most mcr stories i hate bert. (:
    you're an amazing author.
    thank you for writing
    February 2nd, 2010 at 03:18am
  • unforbidden_lov2

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    Gahhh, I forgot to say,
    that this is was beautiful:]]
    I loved both stories, and I'm off to read more!

    I am addicted to your stories now:\\
    December 17th, 2008 at 12:03am
  • Carly.

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    There is nothing like a bit of vintage Lightning Zap...
    :]
    September 9th, 2008 at 07:08pm
  • TARA MUFFINS!

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    AMAZING!
    July 31st, 2008 at 10:09am
  • Shawty.

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    Yay, i finished this one now Dance
    I nearly finished it in the same day, but my dads a tard and cut the Internet so i only had like half an hour a day.

    Anyway, the ending was so sweet, i was like 'awwww' for a long time
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    You ever heard the expression when someone says it's like fitting something the size of a watermelon out of a hole the size of a lemon?

    0_o I'm never having children....*shudders*

    I love this story now, gahh. I need to stop talking :tehe:
    Twas awesome though
    July 24th, 2008 at 04:55pm
  • Lightning Zap

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    No. There's not gonna be a trilogy :P That was the first story I ever wrote... so it won't be touched ever again. A lot of authors tend to delete their first story, but I thought I'd just leave it there for people to read if they wanted to.
    July 15th, 2008 at 10:54pm
  • billiejoe08

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    aww this was so awsome is there gonna be trilogy^ ^
    July 15th, 2008 at 05:56pm
  • billiejoe08

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    awsome story
    July 15th, 2008 at 12:03am
  • billiejoe08

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    awsome story
    July 15th, 2008 at 12:03am
  • N E C R O F I L I A

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    Dude, this story was fuckin beautiful *smile* It brought a pang of hapiness in my heart, god I wanted to cry, but you know me, I don't like doing that in front of my fam, then they ask why and im like gee and frank were married and they fund out their daughter was pregnant and she got married! lmao, but O dont care lolz

    Awesome story, loved everything and anything ^^

    -Pansy

    xxx
    July 10th, 2008 at 09:48pm
  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    ^^ Just a couple :XD But yeah, I got most of it.
    May 8th, 2008 at 12:39am
  • Lightning Zap

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    ^^ Lol, it's ok. You shouldn't have been too lost with what you read. I think I explained most parts about their past. It might just have been a few things which made you think WTF? :P
    May 7th, 2008 at 11:52pm
  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    Wow, I had a total brain fart. I (stupidly) read My Secret Family BEFORE reading My Secret Romance.

    I have no idea how I managed that, but I did, so, I'm going to go and read My Secret Romance, then possibly re-read Family.

    Anyway, great job on this, and I apologize for my idiocy.
    May 7th, 2008 at 06:28pm
  • Red Riding Hoodie

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    Oh Meh Gah!

    I just spent the last three and a half hours reading this story! It's fucking amazing!

    I tried going to the link provided, but it said that the story didn't exist.
    Hmm....

    But yeah. I love this story. It had me on the edge of my seat, crying, and laughing my ass off.

    And for writing such a great, fan-fucking-tabulous story, you get a hug.

    :arms:

    Strange hug from a strange person, I know, but I really liked the story.

    Please write more?

    Bye

    </3
    April 19th, 2008 at 06:27am
  • Lightning Zap

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    :o You finished it! Way to go! :D Thanks for reading it :D
    January 30th, 2008 at 12:20am
  • Freaka.

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    Hooray for happy endings!!!!!!!!! : )
    January 30th, 2008 at 12:15am
  • Lightning Zap

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    ^^ Thanks :D
    January 28th, 2008 at 07:31am