Let My Heart Rest In Pieces - Comments

Love this chapter so much. :) So emotional.

THIS COMMENT SWAP KEEPS BRINGING ME BACK HERE! So, I apologize. The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

It keeps coming back here! Haha I'm so sorry!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

It keeps coming back here! Haha I'm so sorry!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

It keeps coming back here! Haha I'm so sorry!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

It keeps coming back here! Haha I'm so sorry!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

It keeps coming back here! Haha I'm so sorry!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

It keeps coming back here! Haha I'm so sorry!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

This indeed took awhile to read, and I'll admit I'm still in the midst of reading. But I decided to go ahead and leave a comment. I like this story quite alot. It's got the right amount of detail, and despite all the characters, you've managed to develop them well. I like the name Envy, it's so unique. I can't wait to read the rest.

I love MCR <3 This is my third review; first was lost when my computer shut down, second I didn't know Mibba would make vanish if I loaded the next chapter. Ah well. Anyways, I really like this. You're making me fall in love with the characters. It's such a wonderful job. Usually I don't read MCR fic because they aren't very good, but I love yours.

I'm going for a run now, seeing as I've been reading this all morning. I'll be back to give you a better review after though :3

First off, I love the layout. I've always loved a 'Victorian' style background. The descriptions really give you a great idea of who they are if you haven't ever heard of them. And though, it's not really part of the story, I enjoyed reading the characters page. All their personality quirks and what not.

Good job! :]

It keeps coming back here! Haha I'm so sorry!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

When I found out this story had 89 chapters, I must admit that it took me awhile to get into grips with it because it meant I had a lot of chapters to read in order to give a honest and truthful comment towards your story. Even though I like MCR, I never actually spent my time reading fan-fictions about them. You did a very good job at describing the characters n developing the story. I only read a few chapters, but I'm really pleased with the story n found myself smiling at the funny scenes. I'm glad I came across the story. Congratulations!!

Aw this chapter was really sad, I love this story-can't wait for the next update :)

Alright, I come here from comment swap so evidently I didn't have time to read all eighty some chapters. Never before have I read any fanfic related you MCR. In fact I don't think I've even ever listened to their music, so you may want to excuse my newness to the topic....

For someone who has never even seen the band, I think I got a good image of the from your descriptions which is always a good sign. Sometimes I felt as though the story descriptions were forced, like when you used the word 'orbs' when describing Envy. There is nothing wrong with a colorful vocabulary in writing, but it should be kept realistic - would you use the word orbs to describe yourself in every day conversations?

Another thing that was off was the fact that, while making spaghetti, Frank and Envy bump into each other and fall down. Nonetheless with him on top of her. This is an overly cliche thing to happen and highly unlikely, think of the force that the two would have to be running at in order to fall over like that. You may run like that in your kitchen, but I'm pretty sure most people don't which makes this scene unrealistic to me.

You're writing is good, but nothing spectacular. Everyone needs work, there is always room for improvement. When writing try to think of the legitimacy in your writing, because that seems to be the only thing holding this story back for me. :)

"A man that beautiful is not aloud to be gay." Hahaha, even though most gay men are the most attractive. :) Very good story, I'm liking it alot so far! I really like the characters and how they act. It’s very good for visualizing the story. It’s overall pretty wonder ful.