October 19th, 2009 at 12:40am
Ohhh man. I'm glad I finally--ahem-- got to look at this. I'm awfully intrigued. Which basically means I would love to see more. Yes?Even though it has always been said that white represented ‘purity’ and ‘innocence’, nothing felt particularly pure about this place, this… prison.
Something about this line was GOOD stuff.
Richard closed the book for the last time and followed the nurse down the hall, absentmindedly looking around at the white walls that occasionally screamed out at him.
I think this was a fantastic way to conclude the chapter. I loved this last bit.
So, I don't have much to say, except that I'd like to read more so I can get a better idea of it.:) I'm feeling this story.
That was seriously, awesome.
I agree with the point that aphorism and RhetoricalTendencies made, about the "white" comment. There was such truth in that line that it was crazy!
I really, really, really, really want you to update like, soon.
I need to know where your going to take this.
Loved the first chapter, and I'm sure I'll love the rest.
x.