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  • bloodravyn

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    OMFG!!!!!!
    THIS IS INCREDIBLE SO FAR!
    I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!
    (r2r)
    October 13th, 2009 at 02:35am
  • Dionysia

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    This story is awesome and you have done a great job. I like your characters and how well you are describing their emotions. I will surely like to read more for this story and I hope that you will write more soon.
    (r2r)
    October 10th, 2009 at 01:09am
  • Miranda Lee.

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    So I've read the first two chapters, and I must say I was pleasantly surprised. Normally I would not read a story about a vampire school because I assumed them to be rather repetetive, but you've managed to put together a very nice story. The imagery is spectactular, and you capture emotions and thoughts very easily, and it is very believable. The main characters' ever-changing thoughts flow nicely and you portray individuals well (in other words, these characters are very well-developed). I was pleasantly surprised at the entire plot and personalities shown as they display a school and it's cliques nicely. Kudos, and I sincerely hope you keep writing. Your skills are already so amazing, and you have a lot of potential =] just keep an eye out for grammar and spelling, though I understand these are just rough drafts so this is understandable.
    October 8th, 2009 at 01:51am
  • Chrome Hearts

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    I loved it! Please write more, I can't wait to read it!
    October 6th, 2009 at 11:03pm
  • futanari

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    Wow, I really enjoyed your story! And that sure is something, because I really hate vampires! But I really loved the fact that Oriole has a controversial appearance because I absolutely LOVE hermaphrodites! I think that in my mind, that made up for the fact that it's a vampire story, haha! I can't wait to read more! I really really did enjoy reading your story, despite the fact that it's a vampire stroy!
    October 5th, 2009 at 11:16pm
  • shareeg

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    This is a rough draft, the updated version will be up mid-week.
    October 5th, 2009 at 10:30pm
  • This Is Pointless

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    I'm stealing your comment virginity!

    Wow, did I just say that? Well, this is a really descriptive and meaningful story. I can really get into it. And you're going to put up edited versions, right? Because there were a lot of little grammatical and spelling mistakes. But other than that, it's a great story. Update soon!
    October 5th, 2009 at 08:55pm
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