Saying Goodbye - Comments

  • SaveYourDreamingx

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    Awhhhh!
    That was really cute.
    And original.
    It seemed really real, too.
    I loved the fact that it wasn't a right downer, aswell.
    (:
    xx
    October 22nd, 2009 at 12:48am
  • Devihla

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    This was gorgeous!
    I laughed, I pouted and I most of all thought it was incredibly original in that this is new and fresh-kind fo way! :D

    Everything was upside down.. It was sunny, when ususally sad frerards take place in the rain or biting cold snow...

    He rubbed his hands across Franks arms - this is a real random quote, but it's an action that is rarely seen in the written world (at least out of what I've read)... I've seen people do this at airports when they say goodbye to their loved one, but I've never actually remembered it - until now. :D

    And the last sentence makes me think (which I love)...
    Maybe the nice weather wasn’t so bad after all to me is Gerard realizing that Frank being gone might not be as bad as he'd thought, and that maybe being alone for a while would do him good. Whether this could lead to something too good, I don't wanna think about, but the option is there... :)

    I loved this.
    It was different, and gave me a bittersweet feeling inside.
    Very well written! :D
    October 19th, 2009 at 11:15pm