Cold Hands - Comments

Beauty.

The writing is so emotional, and it paints a vivid picture. It really makes me want to know what happened, what's led up to it. This is truly a beautiful piece of writing, and wonderful food for thought.

This is gorgeous, absolutley gorgeous.
The details and description are just breathtaking, it makes the saying "Show, don't tell come to mind while reading this.
You've written it in a way so that the reader can picture and feel everything so well, the hospital, the doctors and nurses, the feel of the needles and rubber gloves...
The last line is incredible, and I love how there the feeling of there being a sense of closure.

Stellar, overall.

This is absolutely flawless, in my opinion.
I love your descriptions, and general style of writing.
It paints an excellent picture, that you can't honestly get enough of.

I especially have an intense liking for the last line.
You really captured this scene, and the emotions so well.
Great job.