You have no idea how long it took me to read that story. I didn't want it too end. It was so good. I loved it so much. The detail you put into it was just amazing! You seriously need to write more of these!
Oh My Good God. I only just read this and fuck. Your writing is absolutely gorgeous, the way you described him in the first few paragraphs, like the person above me said, I could almost smell him, it was so wonderfully detailed. Gah, amazing! I'm off to catch up with your other story now... I'm so out of touch lately, haha. WELL DONE! xxx
Please, oh please God, PLEASE read this and make it into a film??!!!!
Honestly...I'm struggling to type a coherent sentence here. This is, without a doubt, my favourite story of yours XD and not just because I'm great, dirty pervert...but because I could SEE everything you know? I could SMELL the coconut. And I could FEEL Julie's butterflies with every seductive proposition he made.
I repeat, damn you're good!!
Oh, if all sexual experiences were like this hehehe.