Crash Into My Fucking Arms - Comments

Okay this was amazing. Frank was just so scared and so childish at points but honestly it all made sense. Also I loved the fact that he was so forgiving and it made it seem like Gerard could do no wrong. Or if he did he was just like a god to Frank. It's just so amazing. (I need a thesaurus amazing is way too inadequate for my taste)

I read this on The Imortality Project in 2007 and I absolutely loved it. I looked for it for months on the website again but I guess the site got closed down. Me being determined to find and read this story again, I searched it on here and found it. I reread it again and it is so amazing. I read the sequal too and it was just heartbreakingly beautiful and so... God, I can't even find words. Youre an amazing author and I envy you for your talent and I'm extremely thankful that you choose to share it with the Mibba comunity. Thank you so much, I love this story. I think I'll read it again =]

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*squeals* OH MY FRANKING GERARD, THERE'S A SEQUEL?! OH HELL YES! :cheese: :crazy:

THIS. BAH! You... you're going on my profile. xD You're amazing. The ending... holy damn. This is the kind of story who had me yelling at the computer screen because of Gerard's fucked up logic and Frankie's utter submissiveness.
I LOVE how the ending isn't like the ice cream and sprinkles they were eating.
Frankie seems to be believing something he needs in order to get by.
Gerard... hell. You succeeded in making it so I couldn't figure him out!
I ADORE you for that! I love a mystery. So many people make things so obvious in their stories. And a lot of people would have given this a happy ending... well, at least by Gerard believing Frank. But he doesn't and then there's why and what will happen.

Can they make it when only one believes it? Why's Gerard going ahead with it if he doesn't think they'll make it? He said he'll never let go; that he'd never let Frank get hurt.

I, personally, think that's a load of shit. I loved the whole fiasco with Mikey, too. That was the perfect dramatic flair. I don't trust Gerard, though. And he doesn't trust himself.

You create a terrific map of love, pain, fear, and the most brilliant story of life.
I'm hooked.

The ending... just. My God. It's the greatest ending I've ever come across. In anything; on Mibba, in books, anything. I feel like a fish that you've reeled in. The ending really is spectacular. It's perfect. Perfect, perfect, perfect.

Your mind is a beautiful wonderland to have come up with this. :hug:

So I read this a little while ago, and I'm totally unsure as to how I should comment. The story... it doesn't suit my normal reviewing style, so this'll probably be kinda short because I'm not used to working with this kind of review. :cute:

I... loved it. Everything about this story was so absolutely amazing - and I know it's one of your older stories so you'll have supposedly improved but honestly, there's not all that many ways in which you could improve.

Your characters are just so... realistic. I could get involved with them, I knew them, I understood them - to some extent, at least. Generally, I think Frank as the victim is kind of overused, but in this story it just... worked. I could just imagine Gerard being the dominant one in this - maybe because of the height and age difference - and he really just felt like it. He seemed like this big, strong character who was always in control, even though sometimes he... wasn't. He, like the rest of your characters, was really strong and... believable. I think that was probably the story's biggest strength, the believability of the characters and the relationships between them.

Frank. He was such a victim - such a victim. And normally, victims are whiny and stupid and annoying. But Frank... wasn't. He was this poor, vulnerable, victimised character who had obviously had a tough life, and was still struggling along, but he never seemed whiny or annoying. I think you caught his character perfectly; you gave us enough to feel sorry for him, to sympathise and empathise, but not too much, not enough to make him annoying. We saw enough of his character to love him but not enough for him to irritate us.

And I think the third most important character and possibly my favourite was Mikey. I love how Mikey became something like Gerard's conscience, how he contradicted Gerard's impulsiveness and basically reminded Gerard that even though he loved Frank, Frank was vulnerable and likely to fall for Gerard just because he was a safe person. I also like that Mikey didn't just give up when Gerard goes 'I really like Frank' - it was so much more realistic. Like, I know if I think something's dangerous or wrong I don't just drop it because my sister says 'oh but I really like it'... and if I don't, then why would Mikey?

I really like the way you build up your relationships, and how there were already relationships there. Like, even just starting it with the phone call built up this idea that Frank had no one, he had so few relationships that the one he was making so much more special because it was all he had. It's great how you use dialogue, actions and thoughts to build up the relationships, and the way you use sex is really excellent.

The rape scene was fucking fantastic. It was tragic, really, but it felt so... you really explained why Gerard did it and how he just got caught up in the moment. And the aftermath, with the shower... I don't even have the words to describe it but I loved it so much. One of the best rape scenes I've ever read, for sure.

And I also really liked the part where they were in a bar, and they began to really confess their love for each other. It was so beautiful - it flowed so well and the dialogue was really believable and it was just a gorgeous scene and a gorgeous piece of writing. Again, Gerard was being the dominant person but he was truly caring for Frank and it was just so gorgeous.

I really love this story a hell of a lot.
I'm sorry for the shitty review, it blew me away so much that I actually really struggled to write this. :shifty

OMFG!!!!!!!! I read this story on the immortality project and absolutely LOVED it! Eep!
Sorry, yeah, fucking brilliant story mate. I'm gonna go and read all of your others now :D

Holy crap. I found this story on the Immortality Project. And it was so long and hard to read, but I loved it. Shit, I think I read it in one day 'cause I loved it so much.

BUT I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS ON MIBBA. I'm going into cardiac arrest. I love the story and I only get the song reference now because I have both the MCR version and Morrissey's.

Gahhh. I'm so fucking happy I found this!

This was a really good story, wow.
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wow i read one of ur stories and really liked ur writing so i decided to go read another oneof ur stories and i love it!!!!!
u are truely an amazing writer, and i mean that :)
i stayed up from 11 to 2:18 in the morning reading this lol
u are so awesome!!!! <3 <3 <3

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! GOD!! I LOVE IT!

-jaw drops-

Eeeeeeeeeee.
I love you too. :]]

THANK YOU SO MUCH.

I don't even know what to say;
I'm completely flattered && happy && grinning like an idiot.

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Okay. Seriously. I love you.

Even though there are shitloads of Frerard fics involving drugs, rape and angst on here, I took a fucking moment and read your story. This was anything but cliché. The first chapter drew me in right from the start and once I reached its last two paragraphs, I was completely smitten. Your style in writing is something I reaaaallly loved. It's different and straight to the point, yet still kinda warped. I have no idea what I'm talking about. The grim atmosphere you've set in the boys' lives and managed to keep it to the very end, it only added up to the general mood of the whole story and helped me understand the characters better. Gerard's sudden outburst and Frank's childish naivety in those moments swept me off my feet. The way Frank explained his actions - like, he only thought he'd wait till it's over and that he never really hurt him.. - amazing. The ending was brilliant. You left us hanging there, with Gee's grim conclusion of that part of their lives and the story .I don't know what else to say but that I'm really fucking looking forward to seeing where you've taken this in the sequel.

Awesome fucking job. <3

There, I told you I'd leave some sort of a review. I'm usually too lazy, but woah, this made me do it.

Awww. Thanks!

i know that you have sequal to this but i had
to tell you how fucking amazing this is

Yes, I did. :]
I'm glad you like it! &#9829;

didnt you post this on The Immortality Project????? doode I fucking love this story!

Aww, don't feel guilty, the story is amazing, that's all...

ILY too =)

Aww, thanks guys! :]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]
I really appreciate the journal entry, GenRage. :]
And I'm glad you guys like the banner!

Don't cry, Z. I'll feel guilty. :] I &#9829; you.

btw, the new banner is fucking AWEOSOME!
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I soooo just posted a journal entry telling people to read thos story lol

Alright, I haven't read this yet, but the banner made me cry. The whole story kinda washed over me...