I feel so bad that I haven't been reading this story like I said I would But I'm reading it now, up to Chapter 21 It's sooo cute that Syn's teaching Chance how to play Guitar :)
And I just have to say, I laughed so hard back in chapter 61 (i think it was), when a part of a line was something like 'He devoured her lips." Haha. Call me crazy, but I just think those four words are possible the best four words in the world when put together! :P
Yes!!!! He is NOT the father!!! Haha. = D I was thinking of Maury when i read this chapter! = D hehe. Aww!! I hope you'll write a sequel!!! I love ending!!! Can't wait to read more of your stories!! = D
Sorry on the lateness, but that was super de duper amazing!!!! I think you should write a sequel starring one of their kids :] You are truely a talented writer :D Keep it up!
I've only read up to Chapter 10 but I'm going to read about 10 Chapters a day seeing as this is like 65 chapters long. But I love it so far, it's awesome! You're a hell good writer XD
sequel sequel sequel. you can not just leave it there man, it would be a crime agains humanity if you did. i don,t care hw long, just wrie a sequel. i realy did enjoy the story