Clubhouse - Comments

  • oxycontin

    oxycontin (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Canada
    So, Tool’s real name is Jeph, huh? Bert thought. He’s still tool to me.

    Bahaha, that part made me laugh; that's considered a big insult in my school, I hear my friends say it to each other a lot. XD

    Regardless, they finally meet. :'D Bert's successful with freaking out Jeph and soon, they will turn out to find things in common and like each other as time goes on. Or at least I hope so.

    Lovely update, I still can't wait until we get out of the beginning and start to get into the real plot.
    January 3rd, 2010 at 06:55am
  • mayday

    mayday (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    I said I wouldn't read this just for the mere fact that I thought I wouldn't like the pairing.
    But actually, now that I think about it, I do like it. It's cute. :P.

    Well, I honestly don't know what more to say, besides, felling awkward is the worst, eh?
    <3.

    I'm intrigued by this story. No joke, no play.
    January 3rd, 2010 at 04:16am
  • oxycontin

    oxycontin (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Canada
    O__O Shit!

    Dude, I fucking love this story. I never imagined Bert being the unwilling one (even if it was with Branden) but still, it's strange from the persona of him that's in my head as this crazy dontgiveafuck dude to a scared and slightly submissive wimp.

    Bahaha, that sounds so mean but really, you've done a fantastic job, even if you said that this was just the prologue. I can't wait for more of this, love, it's great. :D
    January 2nd, 2010 at 11:08am
  • mayday

    mayday (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    You're crazy, Gaylen.
    Haha.
    You're already a turtle with update for the other story, and now you have two to juggle.
    Well, whatever. It's your challenge. Are you game?! ;D.

    Well, whoa, I didn't see that coming. I didn't see Brandon coming, either. :/. Ah, dry humour.
    Anyways, poor Berty. ): I don't want him to die, so obviously, that's why he never did.

    We shall see, eh?
    Indeed.

    Johnathon is the real lead singer, heh.
    <3.
    January 2nd, 2010 at 07:14am