Dismantle. Repair. - Comments

  • Oh,goodness. I am IN LOVE with this story. Undoubtedly. There's something amazing about Allegra's connection with Nick; However, Declan's promising too. At times, the story is pretty slow. But, here lately it's been fantastic. Keep up the good work.(:
    --autumn
    June 2nd, 2011 at 02:20pm
  • oh my gosh you updated so quickly! It was really good. I liked the whole camera part that Nick sent for her birthday, hopefully she uses it at some point. And Declan freaking out after she agrees what cute

    Awesome update. I'm excited to see what will happen next!!!
    June 2nd, 2011 at 06:32am
  • i am reluctantly going to agree that declan is pretty sweet lol this last chapter is pretty god. its sweet and im glad she trusted declan enough to tell him about her family "secrets" :) great job as always......p.s: imm def. still on nick's team lol i think she should begin using that camera. she shouldnt put her talents to the side no matter what :) cant wait for the next update
    June 2nd, 2011 at 03:14am
  • ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH torn between Nick and Declan, and i can't decide!!

    Update fast, can't wait to see where this goes!! =D
    June 1st, 2011 at 09:47am
  • Gah, this can't be happening. It's gotta be Nick and Allegra all the way!
    June 1st, 2011 at 03:10am
  • awwwwwwwwwwww!!!!(: i was seriously laughing the whole time i was reading this chapter(: i love Delcan!!!!!!(: maybe even better than Nick... I mean Legs seems way happy with D than Nick...
    UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(:
    and i wanna know whats going on with Nick, Charlie, and Kenny!!
    June 1st, 2011 at 02:44am
  • Wow, I'm kinda surprised they kissed so quickly. Break up and her sorrow was supperrlyyy well portrayed though. I could feel her pain!
    May 23rd, 2011 at 03:22am
  • 3 words...well 6 words actually: TOTALLY LOVED IT!!! WORTH THE WAIT!!!

    Oh my gosh. Where to start? Well first off I guess I should say I purposely left to reading this today so that I'd have a pick-me-up after my job fair. lol! Definitely worked as I hoped it would. :)

    I am not mad at all that Declan and Allegra kissed! Actually I've kinda switched teams now and I want them to get together as a couple. They are good for each other and they know how the other felt after their respective breaks. I mean he can still make her laugh and smile and that's what's important. I understand the whole 'don't want him to be a rebound' thing, but I don't think it will be that. You know what? I want to see them get together, be ecstatically happy, then Nick comes back and begs Allegra to take him back, but she chooses Declan over him! That would be perfect. I mean sure Nick didn't mean to cheat on her but he still did. He can't take it back. Maybe he'll work it out with Charlie or something. I don't know. At this point I just don't think that Nick deserves Allegra any more. I don't care what's going on in his life. Besides he complained a lot to her about his dad and stuff and that wasn't fair to her even though she never complained about it. I won't go so far as to say he deserves bitchzilla; nobody deserves her. LOL!

    I like how her parents were so concerned about her and tried whatever they could to get her open her door. Declan's movie-in idea was good. He's too great! I want him! Why can't there be a guy like him in real life? :( LOL! I really hope nothing bad happens between him and Allegra. I'm all for them becoming a couple. :D Do it sis! You know you what to ;)

    Fantasterrific update!! Can't wait to see more!! Ahh! So glad this is back. hehehe!!
    May 21st, 2011 at 07:28pm
  • Update update update!! haha I seriously love this story and I'm so glad you came back! The chapter was so good and I can't wait to see what happens with Allegra and Declan!! =)
    May 21st, 2011 at 05:22am
  • I promised I would comment on the story so here i am!
    Really, its not as bad as Allegra is making it out to be. To me, I feel like shes overreacting. Sure, Nick cheated on her (in a way) but 1)HE WAS DRUNK!(Thanks not an excuse but it does play a huge role in it all) 2)He was overthinking about Allegra the whole time anyways. 3) its not like he meant to, it just happened like that. Ahh this is just kinda making me frusterated now. PLUS, right after her and Nick broke up shes kissing Declan so doesnt that kind of make her bad too? seriously?! Rebound, never, she'll end up with Nick in the end anyways. SEE she loves Nick, thats why shes still thinking about them when the four of them are at the mall. and to answer your questions: I AM mad that they kissed, over it though; i do understand Allgera wanting to feel wanted. the break up with Nick had made her feel unwanted. Declan, i feel, is just waiting for the right time to swoop in and take Allgera from Nick. He just wants her all to himself. and be you she will use him as a rebound for a little while just too feel something after the breakup with Nick. This story i wonderful and thank you for keeping it the way it should be, update soon (:
    May 21st, 2011 at 04:03am
  • UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!
    May 20th, 2011 at 07:15am
  • Oh my gosh! I was so excited when I got my notification email!!! I loved this chapter idk, something is a little fishy with Declan, but I have a feeling he's the repair part as much as I don't like it. Good jon on the chapter and I can't wait til the posts keep coming!!!!
    May 20th, 2011 at 06:34am
  • this ch seriously made questions rise in my mind lol it was pretty good. buuuttttt i dont think i like allegra and declan as much as i like allegra and nick lol cant wait to read what happens next!!!
    May 20th, 2011 at 04:59am
  • You must, must, must get inspiration soon or I will die. I love this story. So much.
    March 7th, 2011 at 03:42am
  • Oh my god. oh my god. Oh my god. That was so dramatic. But it was perfect! I love nick but seriously, thats exactly how she should be feeling. Im really curious to see how all of this turns out. Will she find someone new.. dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!

    Please update! This was amazing!
    March 3rd, 2011 at 06:27am
  • Gosh, why do you have to write so well and make me want to bawl =[
    February 24th, 2011 at 10:26pm
  • Oh. Wow.

    So that's our prologue tie-in. I'm seriously speechless right now. I truly am. It was the emotions that rang through the whole chapter. You are seriously amazing...a true genius...with emotions. Damn. Sis, you need to teach me how to convey emotions as good as that. My heart feels like its breaking with Nick's and Allegra's. :(

    I had my suspicions that it was her dad in the prologue (but then again we talk and tease each other so...haha!). But I really liked how protective he was of her. He and Allegra have gotten close and he's not gonna let his little girl be hurt by any guy. He's like the perfect dad. :) I wonder if her mom is acting the same as her dad right now. Maybe her mom can talk her through the pain of heartbreak...or maybe Declan??? He's been through it too so he could be her shoulder to cry on. And sadly, I can't say I'm totally against it. I really like Declan. He's gonna have to screw up pretty badly for me to want Allegra to go back with Nick. That pains me to say it, but its true. I think they are being harsh on Charlie and Nick because all they did was kiss when they were drunk and depressed, but I can understand it. Hopefully things will change. My fingers are crossed for the best. I do give Nick props for telling her in person. I don't think Kenny should've told her but I kinda guessed he would. It packs a bigger punch to the heart to hear it from someone else and hope its wrong only to find out its true.

    I can't wait for the 'Repair' part! I know it'll be awesome! Take your time with updating. School comes first. And so you know, I'm working on ATIMS tonight. Its slow going though. Just a heads-up. Can't wait for another update!! Loved this one!! :D
    February 21st, 2011 at 12:51am
  • :[
    February 20th, 2011 at 10:41pm
  • ahhhhhhh! i loved it.. but so sadddd :( poor allegra and even nick <3
    February 19th, 2011 at 01:27am
  • I just finished rereading the prequel and this<3 can't get over this story it's so intriguing! One of my favorites(: update soon btw(:
    January 31st, 2011 at 06:08pm