Amazing, Because It Is. - Comments

Um, so this story was seriously amazing. It's been years since you've posted it, and I have no idea if you even get on here anymore to read comments, but I had to leave one.
This was seriously so sweet and beautiful and heartfelt and just... ugh, I loved it. You're an amazing writer. <3
I really hope you're still writing on your own time, because you shouldn't give it up. This story was seriously so great and it will definitely go down as one of my favorites I've read on this site.
While the ending was a bit sad, it was also very conclusive and it ended really the only way it could. A bit bittersweet but I loved it nonetheless. Brooklyn was able to gain so much from her experience with Alex.
Amazing job. :)

I am completely in love with this story, it's honestly fantastic and on the same level as some published books that I've read in the past. You should be proud :)

A little late, but I'm one of those readers...

Anyway, I loved reading this… beautifully written thing of a disaster.
The entire time I was reading it it was just unexplainable, but I couldn't divert my myself from it.
Your writing style was just, put it this way if your writing would be a person boy or girl, they would be so gorgeous it would be criminal.
I laughed and giggled.
And the last two chapters drove my sorry ass to tears, which only happens once in a blue a moon, so consider yourself a damn good writer, because I dont shed tears willy nilly
But yes a loved this piece of work, and hope to see more of your stuff soon

- Taye

This also should be a book, and a movie. No joke. Really think about maybe writing this into a script or something. It's amazing.

This really is one of, if not, the best stories I've ever read. It made me cry. It made me happy, over all I enjoyed it and never wanted it to end. Please don't stop writing. This story believe it or not, has inspired me. It has inspired to start living and loving more (: It's truly amazing.

-Jessica

I really enjoyed this! Very original. :)

This was a beautiful story, I'm so glad I read it.
You're writing is wonderful, the plot line is amazing, there's nothing I didn't like about this.
This story would totally pwn Twilight, I agree with the person above me.

First off...I love you. Your writing is absolutely amazing in this story (I haven't read your other stories (if you have any) so it's nothing personal) This story is legit the best story I have read on this site. This story deserves to be a book, a book that everyone would read and brag about. This story should come out and beat Twilight (i don't like the series =/) and I would re-read it. I would own it in every possible form. I would spread it like the gospel. It probably sounds like I'm overexaggerating but I'm not. I'm serious. Amazing story. (:

Fifth Chapter:
Haha Ghost Alex is so funny!
Yes, I really, truly, am beginning to be in love with this story.
I want to keep reading but I can't - not now. I have too many entries to read for my contest.
Anyhoo, good luck with that.

And I love the quotes at the beginning of each chapter!

For the record, keep up the good work!

Fourth Chapter:
And we finally get to meet the ghost!!
Haha he is so cocky and not-what-I-thought-he-would-be-like-at-all

Third Chapter:
And here it comes, the self-blame.
At the very least, I could've been killed as well.
That hurt to read. It was both horrible, and amazing at the same time.

Second chapter:
Loving how you described the mother. Utterly amazing.
Seriously, your descriptions of EVERYTHING just take my breath away.
I was quick on the uptake, and it hit me harder than a speeding semi-truck.
We were leaving because of the memories.
Because they all contained Jeremy.
So sad. So, so sad.

Yes, when I continue to review the next 3 chapters of this story, you will see that there will, more often then not, contain snippets of your story.

I can't really say keep up the good work, because this has heaps of chapters ahead of what I'm up to. So I will say;
Loving it.

First Chapter:
There was so much description, I almost felt overwhelmed. I wouldn't take this as a bad thing though.
Most people can't make that much descriptive writing flow as naturally as you can.
This was my favourite part;
Jeremy's words circled in my mind like carnivorous vultures, swooping down with large, dark wings that spanned my entire conscious and pecking at wounds that were already stinging.
Love, love, LOVED it.

And the ending really got to me, in the way you were so abrupt in saying that JEremy was dead.
Awesome (:

Hello hello! I'm your judge for Fangs Up's contest. I'm kind of upset that my computer has been such a cranky bitch lately, otherwise I would have read all of it and got my judging done sooner. *bad computer*
But, I have read the first half (I plan on reading the rest when I'm done with all this judging that needs to get done XD) and it is just what the title says. I really like the quotes at the beginning, they're just like this little nudging at what she's going through in her life right now, and they're always relevant. I haven't see quotes pulled off that well before. (Except Criminal Minds, but that's a different story XD)
Anyways, moving on. I think this is one of the best pulled off ghost stories I've read in a while. Usually the people that are still alive are always just, "Oh, we miss you, I wish you were still alive!" and such, so I loved how annoying you made Alex at some points. I think it made it more realistic.
I guess the only thing would be to work more on putting images into the readers head. In other words, just a little more detail. It would make the story feel more...alive? Pun there...but it would give everyone a better image of what's going on. Your plot is great, now we just need to add more picture.
Overall, amazing. :) I really liked it.
~Icamane

Second time reading it and I must say...I cried again :] Lol.

Oh my god! Like seriously this my favorite story so far on Mibba :] I am like in love with how you wrote so beautifully! Amazing! I'm probably going to read it over again haha. I cried on Alex's letter. I am so emotional with this kind of shit. Lol. But I fucking love this story! My favorite! You're such an amazing writer! :]

hiiiiiiiiiiiii! you entered this into my contest, so thanks! [prewrite one]
ummmm anything to be constructive about? Sometimes it lacked a detail or two about simple things. Stories can get by without them, but I never really felt like I could imagine her or anything [excepting the room, cause you obviously showed a picture]. I'd mention the sexual content which is something I never read, but shamefully, it did fit quite well.
Over all! You turned what could have been cliche into something totally your own. I mean, I've read a ghost story or two- but none of them grabbed me like yours did. You spent the time running me around in circles with hopeful ideas, thoughts, and confusion. But in a good way, no worries! Because you never strayed from your points or anything, which was great.
It was such a cute story, and I also enjoyed all the quotes and subplots inside of this.
You put in a lot of time and effort, I could tell, and it paid off swellll. I loved their relationship and I'm so glad you turned this into a [pretty much] happy ending! You made things turn out for the better and everything went out evenly which looked pretty tough.Great job!!

And I forgot to mention how amazing and lovely it was. That too. I really, really, REALLY enjoyed reading this <3

L.O.V.E. it! XD <33333

Beautiful. This is the first I've read for the contest, and I'm tempted to not read the others, because they'll struggle to live up to this. I don't usually enjoy fan-fic, but this was so subtle, until the names were mentioned I didn't know it was fan-fic. A gorgeous and superb piece of writing.
Well done and Good Luck!
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