If I saw a spider, I'd be grabbing the nearest killing weapon and smash it while screaming my head off. And maybe breathing heavily ;). I loved this chapter! What's wrong with Matty Bear >:[ ?
Hehe Mattie is cute and bubbly. Oh I now officaly hate Lane's first and last name...sorry memories. Anyway. Lane needs someone like Mattie....damn! Why does his name have to be Matt!?
I am just going to stop commenting now. It was really good and descriptive, hon. Thanks for the update. I hope you update soon! :)).
i love this! tip- if you wait for editors, you're going to be waiting for a while! last time that happened to me. i finished the story, and it still said waiting for editors xP