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  • shelby bree.

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    Figure something out! Quick! I need to read more!
    December 24th, 2010 at 06:34pm
  • TottallyJO

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    i like it, it is a little confusing but it would solve itself if you elaborate more on feelings,the characters, and settings. So many POV's are great but you still need to set up the basics. Longer sections before you switch would be better cause then you can get the flow of it. I still like it. im just mucho picky.
    November 14th, 2009 at 05:36am
  • LiveInTheMusic

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    I can't wait for more:)
    November 13th, 2009 at 02:49am
  • catgirl87

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    I really like the start of this! So many POVs and I totally like Erika making life miserable for Joe. He deserves it after what he said and did to Ivy. The kitty is cute too. :D I wanna know who this mystery guy is that you allude to in the summary. Hmm...I have no idea! haha. Please let it be Joe, please let it be Joe. Can you tell I want Joe and Ivy to get together? :P It will happen in time I guess. I hope. Update when you can!
    November 5th, 2009 at 11:30pm
  • InactivedAcct

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    LOVE IT!
    Yay me!
    haha, but update SooN!!!!
    I'll try and make a banner, but I'll have to figure out how...
    haha.
    November 5th, 2009 at 09:17pm
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