Lips Are Quivering Like a Withering Rose - Comments

Absolutely loved the story - just wasn't a big fan of Hayden for a while there.
Overall, though, it was amazing! :)

I loved the ending :) it has me anticipating more, can not wait til the sequel <3

So this story took me 3 days to read, but it was soo worth it. You're such a good writer and i felt like i was reading a book instead of something on mibba. I'm sooo pumped for this sequel so hurry up! I'm already subscribed to it :D

imm sooo stoked for the sequel!!

imm sooo stoked for the sequel!!

I'm just going to tell myself that them falling asleep together is the ending and I'll feel much much better. That's just kinda how it's going to be, and I swear, if he doesn't come back and fix this I will throw a fit... Seriously? Seriously?
Really Damien? Be all sweet just to turn around and be a bigger jerk? Really? Is that really how we want to play this game? That's just not nice at all. Don't lead poor Hayden on. :(
And serious. My ending is happy and beautiful and that's just how it's going to be. Uhuh. That's right. :P I'm happy now. :) I have a happy ending. :)

Why do you do this to us? D:
I love you Damien, but but but.....
-sobs-
Damien's parents need to go fuck themselves in the ass.

-crossesfingersforcommentfivehundred-
Wtf. I get 200 but not 300 or 400? I'd better get 500.

Personally, I really liked the ending. It went with how Damien acts. You did an amazing job with this story, and I can't wait for the sequel :)

I have a love hate relationship with that ending. I hate it because I knew what was coming but I still hoped for the impossible. So more I hate myself. I loved the ending because it was amazing. You're an awesome author. I actually thought it was going to be a dream at first. I'm glad it turned out to be real. I love bittersweet endings and that's exactly what that was. Thanks and I'll see you for the sequel :D

WTF. Omg he said I love you and left ;_; I'm so confused.
I can't wait for the sequal.

Holy shit. I loved this story so much, I don't want to repeat myself from previous comments so I think I'm just going to ramble. This was just amazing, every bit of it. The characters, the plot line, the vagueness you had with certain things that made me want to keep reading and kept me on my toes for every chapter. This is one of my favourite stories and I'm really sad to see it end (and that ending, oh my god I'm confused but in a good way and I just want you to start posting the sequel already ugh) but you have such talent, you're a great writer and you should feel insanely proud of this story.

Oops!
Meant to say "It was NOT majorly depressing!"

My heart almost stopped beating when the words "The End" showed up!
Then I saw the button for the sequel and was about to click it when I had the thought "I hate it when people don't comment on my stories..."
So here I am!
Telling you that this has been the best story EVER!
Even though it wasn't nessecarily a "Happy ending" it was majorly depressing.
I really liked the ending, how Damian was finally sweet for a while and how Jeffery has to break the news.
Can't wait to read more on the sequel!

wait a minute.
THAT was the ending?
awe. i was hoping for a little more heart wrenching.
i mean, that didn't exactly end on a happy note either, but still.
and im curious about the sequel.
what's that going to be about?
hmm....curiosity...

I can't believe this story is over. The ending made me sad :( I can't wait to read the sequel! I loved reading this story :)

Just read this story non stop and i seee a possibillity for it to be a happy ending, not the whole 'every thing will be perfect ending' but still happy regardless. Damien is eighteen and his parents do not control everything he do, he is grown now so he should just move out already and get a job, better yet him and hayden could possibly try to be roomies or something, he is starting to realise he loves him after all. It is realistic too, 0lus hayden will be eighteen soon and damien is eighteen, he do not have to go to rehab and do what his parents tell him. He could be a man and taker care of himselfand let hayden take care of him and lurv him ^_^ It is realistic, but if you do make a sa d ending, their is possiblities for a sequel, maybe he could get revenge on jake then, perhaps he could really give hayden a chance after all. Lovely story by the way, can not waity for more and see how this story turns out and i hope my hapy ending explanation is good enough for this to turn out some what happy at least, some times being to real is depressing, too many people fuck up and ruin their lives in real life, damien fucked up enough already, even in real life people could change :)

Happy ending, because poor Hayden deserves that much :c

I think this story should have a happy ending because the rest of the story has been kinda sad.
I feel like sad stories deserve happy endings. :]

Sad ending:
Because to be honest, it's lready down hill. He's going back to a center and hyden know next to nothing about damien and he claims not liking hyden so why not? I love him and all, but damien's a douche.
Happy ending:
They've been through hell of a lot and deserve something nice.

...yeah

well the ending, what ever you think fits best. But I do want to see what happens when (please let it be when and not if) Damien tells Hayden about his long lost brother and what happened and shit.

ps sorry i don't comment very often--my computer does this really weird thing when I do, I don't even know how to explain it, and then I hafta restart it, blah blah blah...but I really do love this story :)