Unrequited: A Series of Heartbreaks - Comments

  • barely legal

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    Pah, yay, I love you.
    You have defiantly excelled in satisfying my needs! :lmfao

    I haven't finished them yet, but so far they are all awesome. :XD
    Good job, "mon amie."
    :tehe:

    x
    May 4th, 2009 at 06:28pm
  • Cho Kyuhyun

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    These are all amazing, and I really like them. You are such a talented writer. :]. xxxx
    July 27th, 2007 at 12:51am
  • aksuskfk92

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    your stories're awsome
    July 26th, 2007 at 02:16pm
  • the.silence

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    *sniffs* Poor Tre. Billie you jackass!
    July 19th, 2007 at 07:07am
  • Lyddy Cool

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    hahahahaha oops... i forgot those chapters. i had read them XD im such a plank!
    June 29th, 2007 at 12:09pm
  • Absent Brain

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    plz wrte more i miss reading it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
    June 26th, 2007 at 11:39am
  • Absent Brain

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    hey still gud plz write more
    May 10th, 2007 at 01:59pm
  • AndTheCowSaidMoo

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    Finally...the chapter Im in appears!
    Good work, Tutti Fruitti!
    I wish I had more dialog though; my vocab is worthy of more than 2 lines.
    May 5th, 2007 at 07:33pm
  • Absent Brain

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    gud stories continue
    April 28th, 2007 at 01:41pm
  • Mike Dirnt.

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    :cheese:

    The gift of gab. Or type.
    April 27th, 2007 at 04:49am
  • folie a dru.

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    Onstage for Ages

    It made sense, of course. They always would be best friends and they would always be in love.

    I love that line because it’s so simple but it sums up the entireness of the story and of Tre’s heartbreak.

    I also like how he’s imagining everything so vividly and at the end it’s not what it was. It’s brilliant.

    Rainy Nights and Regrets

    I guess Mike saw the weird grin on my face, mostly because he tilted his head a little and looked at me with that what-is-going-on-in-your-head? look.

    Dunno why. But I love it. :D

    I think Television and I are best friends because we have similar attention spans.

    Simply because it seems quite true and extremely Tre.

    Neither of us noticed; he was drunk with beer and I was drunk with love.

    I like it because it shows how they can be the same, yet different. [/lameness]

    All By Myself

    The only problem with that is that Billie Joe’s sister knows that too and refuses to answer the door.

    Love it. So human. Amusing. :D

    I could taste him stronger than ever.

    Once again, no reason why I love this line. I just do.

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    Darling, you have absolutely no reason to worry about your writing. You’re one of “those” writers. There are few, but they’re always genius. You write like a writer. You can write. Don’t worry about it. I promise that you have “the gift”.

    -hugs-
    April 27th, 2007 at 03:02am
  • James Sullivan

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    awww!
    poor Tre.
    April 10th, 2007 at 04:30pm
  • Lyddy Cool

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    fucking awesome stories!

    *sings all by myself* me didnt think bj was gonna show either. or that tre would leave
    February 12th, 2007 at 05:51pm
  • AndTheCowSaidMoo

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    No, you told me about the next on that Im gonna be in. :D

    Or maybe you did and I wasnt paying attention.
    February 6th, 2007 at 12:56pm
  • Mike Dirnt.

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    Woot. Unrequited's first Mibba comment!

    You didn't know Billie was gonna come? ...didn't I tell you the story on MSN?
    February 5th, 2007 at 04:09pm
  • AndTheCowSaidMoo

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    Shit!
    Thats was good Clap . I didnt think Billie was gonna show. But Im glad he did- made for a better story, me thinks. Cant wait for the next one :tehe
    February 5th, 2007 at 03:51pm