May 4th, 2009 at 06:28pm
Unrequited: A Series of Heartbreaks - Comments
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These are all amazing, and I really like them. You are such a talented writer. :]. xxxxJuly 27th, 2007 at 12:51am
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your stories're awsomeJuly 26th, 2007 at 02:16pm
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*sniffs* Poor Tre. Billie you jackass!July 19th, 2007 at 07:07am
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hahahahaha oops... i forgot those chapters. i had read them XD im such a plank!June 29th, 2007 at 12:09pm
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plz wrte more i miss reading it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzJune 26th, 2007 at 11:39am
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hey still gud plz write moreMay 10th, 2007 at 01:59pm
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Finally...the chapter Im in appears!
Good work, Tutti Fruitti!
I wish I had more dialog though; my vocab is worthy of more than 2 lines.May 5th, 2007 at 07:33pm -
gud stories continueApril 28th, 2007 at 01:41pm
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:cheese:
The gift of gab. Or type.April 27th, 2007 at 04:49am -
Onstage for Ages
It made sense, of course. They always would be best friends and they would always be in love.
I love that line because it’s so simple but it sums up the entireness of the story and of Tre’s heartbreak.
I also like how he’s imagining everything so vividly and at the end it’s not what it was. It’s brilliant.
Rainy Nights and Regrets
I guess Mike saw the weird grin on my face, mostly because he tilted his head a little and looked at me with that what-is-going-on-in-your-head? look.
Dunno why. But I love it. :D
I think Television and I are best friends because we have similar attention spans.
Simply because it seems quite true and extremely Tre.
Neither of us noticed; he was drunk with beer and I was drunk with love.
I like it because it shows how they can be the same, yet different. [/lameness]
All By Myself
The only problem with that is that Billie Joe’s sister knows that too and refuses to answer the door.
Love it. So human. Amusing. :D
I could taste him stronger than ever.
Once again, no reason why I love this line. I just do.
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Darling, you have absolutely no reason to worry about your writing. You’re one of “those” writers. There are few, but they’re always genius. You write like a writer. You can write. Don’t worry about it. I promise that you have “the gift”.
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awww!
poor Tre.April 10th, 2007 at 04:30pm -
fucking awesome stories!
*sings all by myself* me didnt think bj was gonna show either. or that tre would leaveFebruary 12th, 2007 at 05:51pm -
No, you told me about the next on that Im gonna be in. :D
Or maybe you did and I wasnt paying attention.February 6th, 2007 at 12:56pm -
Woot. Unrequited's first Mibba comment!
You didn't know Billie was gonna come? ...didn't I tell you the story on MSN?February 5th, 2007 at 04:09pm -
Shit!
Thats was good . I didnt think Billie was gonna show. But Im glad he did- made for a better story, me thinks. Cant wait for the next one :teheFebruary 5th, 2007 at 03:51pm
You have defiantly excelled in satisfying my needs! :lmfao
I haven't finished them yet, but so far they are all awesome. :XD
Good job, "mon amie."
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