Only With You - Comments

this is an adorable shot. the shy and scared way Frank acts so he can get the one boy he wants, and maybe just needs is beautiful. it's like they were meant to be together and finally got their chance, specially seeing as they are both stuck in the shadows of the same person and not they can be happy together.
the real question is why don't you write anymore?! this shot was beautiful and you could probably be writing amazing stories :D

so cute! I love it <3 <3 <3

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that was a beautiful story. it was adorable and sweet :) i once again appreciate you use of vocabulary, as well as your wonderful ways of writing:)))

At the beginning, I wasn’t sure what to expect. The description, however, said that it would be a fluffy Frerard, so I’ll admit that that’s what attracted me to the story first. I’d prefer to read a happy story rather than a sad and depressing story… especially when I have to write a paper today; I need to be as happy as freaking possible. XD
The way that you described Mikey made it seem like he was actually that sort of person, adding to the effect of how Frank’s personality was, which I loved. I know that that kind of “duo” happens a lot in the “real world”, so it definitely seemed realistic that Mikey and Frank's friendship and personalities were like that. Personally, a type of friendship has happened to me very similar to how you made Frank and Mikey's; I was the shy and quiet one while my best friend (but now ex-friend) ruled the school. I still haven’t changed though, but I like how I am… even if I'm a major pushover. XD
I thought it was adorable how Frank told Gerard his little problem “problem” that he had. It was even cuter – and harder to believe him – when he said that “he thought she was really hot”. Because Frank is the little timid kid who never really speaks up, it just seemed to bold of him to say that, ultimately making it seem like he was lying (which he was!).
Gerard's response was practical… so practical that I knew Frank was lying then and there. =)
The way that Frank kept pressing Gerard to let them kiss was so cute.

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“No, you don’t understand.” Frank replied, “This means a lot to me. Too much, probably, but... I’m just nervous. And I really want this. So, uh, I was wondering... could you... could you teach me how to kiss?”

The way he said that he really wanted this gave it away that he just wanted to kiss Gerard – which I thought was so sweet.
Being the type of person he is, I must say, he had a lot of guts for trying that hard to kiss Gerard (I know I wouldn’t be able to do that to a crush that I might have).
I love how you made Gerard behave. He seemed like an actual twenty-one year old and not some horny teenager himself, which is rather refreshing to read. He didn’t jump all over Frank and they didn’t just start having sex like some “fluffy” stories can go. I loved the tenderness that the two shared. That made me love the story so much more.
And then, when Gerard deepened the kiss, he knew that he shouldn’t be doing it because, well, he didn’t know how Frank felt. Since Frank is shy, he might not have had the courage to pull away and could’ve been a pushover and just let Gerard take advantage of him. Like Gerard said, you kind of had to be a pushover around Mikey, so it was thoughtful how Gerard remembered that quality of Frank's and respected Frank enough to pull away.
Frank's “confession session” (hehe, I rhymed ^_^) made me aww. The way that you wrote it was so much better than Frank jumping on Gerard, kissing him while he said these things to Gerard. If he would’ve done that, I don’t think that I would’ve respected the fluffiness that you’ve already built up. I'm glad that instead of ending it and turning it into something smutty, that you kept it fluffy all the way through =)
How Gerard said that he always thought Frank was special, was definitely heartwarming. His thoughts were actually apparent near the beginning when Gerard thought about Frank – about how he had to be this amazing person to be able to put up with Mikey in the first place.
When Gerard said to Frank, “You're beautiful”, I thought that was better than saying “I love you”. It was just so much more realistic for a short story.
The ending – and I'm not gonna lie – brought me close to tears. Gerard seemed like he really meant what he said to Frank, which made the moment so much more special.
It seemed like Gerard had a bit of a realization there at the end as well; when he said that kissing was only breathtaking with Frank, it made it seem like all of his failed relationships didn’t even matter anymore because he now had this amazing person in his arms. It was like he could finally get over those relationships and move on because he now had Frank, and Frank was the one that made the move first, and that was accomplished just by him knocking on Gerard's door – another thing that made Frank seem so brave since he's not like Mikey and doesn’t just throw things out there.
Regardless of the age difference, I think that they’ll end up a happy couple. ^_^
I definitely thought that this was a sweet story. I loved it.
Everything about it was cute – even if it was slightly sad (Gerard at the beginning). Both Gerard and Frank were the cutest of characters. There wasn’t one single attribute about them that made me dislike them in any way, which is something that isn’t accomplished so easily of me.
A lot of the time, sex is a key factor in Frerard stories, and one of them is like, this sex-crazed freak, and I’ll usually have an utter disliking to that character because of that fact. Yes, sex is mildly important, but every other chapter shouldn’t be them having sex; it tends to take away from the main plot of the story and it really dulls the story out, even if it is just a short story. So, with my little rant being said, I'm so happy that this story stayed light and fluffy and sweet all the way through. Because of that, this is now one of my favorite stories just because it was so cute and all the sweet stuff =)
If you're still reading this long-ass comment, then wow. I completely lost track of how much I was writing… XD
I would like to thank you for writing this story, because it really made my day and brought up my spirits, which I needed (stupid school projects). I loved reading this story. You're really an amazing author =)
I love you and this story. <3

aw i loved it so much. it was so cute

Awww. That was just sweet.
So sweet.
That was just so warming and sweet!
(I know I've used sweet twice, but I'm trying to get a point across XD)
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Gah! *sigh* that was so sweet! i love it so much!! Great job!! =D

This was absolutely adorable. Sweet, innocent and heartwarming. Loved it.

Awww, I loved it! :D It was so cuteeeee. ^ ^

This was really sweet and cute. Seriously. :D

It feels strange to read a story in which Mikey is self confidant and obnoxious. XD

I thought this was cute, loved the idea, and am glad you wrote it. :D

AAWWWW!!
that´s so sweet! :D
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How precious :3.
Wonderfully written, dear.