Let's Get One Thing Straight, - Comments

  • camera ready kids.

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    They're gonna be...friends?
    I can sense a whirlwind of drama x]
    I wonder how the other boys'll react to this :\

    Update soon?
    <333
    November 26th, 2009 at 05:38am
  • camera ready kids.

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    Haha, I approve of True Love Waits.'s recent comment XDD
    Anyways (:

    THEY'RE MEETING IN 'THEIR PLACE'
    Gah! What the fuuuh's gonna happen!?
    I'm. so. JUMPY.
    Haha x]

    Update soon, or I might jump to da MOON...
    God, I feel horrible for posting that rhyme XD
    November 24th, 2009 at 06:07am
  • pretty reckless.

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    AALSHGEGNEASGLSJGLASFGLHASDG
    She wouldn't marry him?! I would've said HELL FUCKIN' YES in a heartbeat! Oh, my GOD!

    Yay for two updates!! :DDD
    That was intense! Jared is one fireball. :O
    I feel SO bad for Kennedy. ...and kind of for Macey, but some of my pity for her went away when I found out she wouldn't marry Kenny! Oh, my holy freaking baby jesus! Why did she say 'no'!??
    November 23rd, 2009 at 01:27am
  • camera ready kids.

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    Ouch, Jare's being a little too harsh :\
    I can understand why she said no, and everybody else should...

    -Points above-
    I agree with everything about Kenny's eyes (:

    Update soon? <333
    November 22nd, 2009 at 09:29pm
  • darklover

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    whoa...i love jared but this was extremely harsh of him to do...poor macey... :(
    i agree with True Love Waits.- kenny's eyes are so pretty :)
    love it, love it! more?
    November 22nd, 2009 at 06:49pm
  • pretty reckless.

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    I have this pity for Macey. I would feel so awful if my brother was so angry with me like that. It makes me that much more curious to know what happened between her and Jared.

    Also, I love how you're very vague with Kennedy--you just focus on his brown eyes. It's like, that's all she really sees: his eyes. It's beautiful. Loved this last chapter.
    <3
    November 22nd, 2009 at 12:03am
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    First off I'd like to say that I really like the beginnning where she really does'nt explain why she left. It's more or less in a way suspensful and I enjoy that she's related to JARED! *clears throat* Moving on... And when Macy makes contact with Kenny's eyes from the framed picture, it was just so...AWESOME! All in all I really like where this story is going. Update soon,please? :)
    November 21st, 2009 at 04:25pm
  • camera ready kids.

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    I'm curious about her and everyone else...
    It seems like her arrival may 'cause some troubles :\
    Since it seems John's accepting the fact that she's back
    Jared isn't...But why's he so mean though? XP
    I like that Jared's tougher in this story (:

    Update soon? <3
    November 21st, 2009 at 11:31am
  • pretty reckless.

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    This is brilliant. Your writing style is just beautiful.
    Your first chapter was great--which I think is most important. It was what pulled me in; I definitely wanted to read the second chapter after that. And the second was even better.
    I would love to find out what happened between Macey and Kennedy. I'm so intrigued. What awful things did she do? Those kind of questions are going through my head right now.

    I can't wait for a new update!
    <3
    November 21st, 2009 at 09:32am