Also, just a heads up- I'm currently in the process of writing up the next chapter and I'm warning you now it's a lengthy read already sorry! Will be posting it later this week because I want time to edit it etc... Cheers!
Oh wow! Thanks so much for the comments guys, it is so great to hear you're enjoying reading it. Whenever I get lazy or doubt myself I reread all these beautiful comments and am completely motivated to keep on writing so sending a really big thank you to you all :)
oh wow @ hanadij, I very rarely check this site anymore because I started to invest my time into other creative projects! Thank you so very much for commenting, it's really nice to know you've enjoyed my story so far :) Honestly, I wasn't planning to continue any of my stories on Mibba...however seen as you've made the effort to comment and there is someone out there interested in reading this I'm willing to give this another go and finish it- I'll try and post an update next week? :)
You are honestly such a talented writer, your descriptions are awesome. I'm just a little irritated with your heroine in this chapter. I understand feeling dread and guilt in the pit of your stomach, but I can't imagine projectile vomiting from an emotion. I feel it's a tad over dramatic to be believable. If this has actually happened to you or someone you know, though, I completely get why you would mention that in the story.
I'm excited to see how things with Zack turn out though. I love his character, he's the classic white knight, hot but sweet guy that we all crave :)
OMGGG I need the next chapter!!!! I really need to see how things go with Jess and Cassie, although I have a feeling that they aren't going to go super smoothly.
I am really happy that is finally with Zack. Well whatever she is with Zack. I am damn happy about it :)
Yay! New chapter :] I'm very happy with this chapter, and the Zack thing going on <3 I adore him and this story so much. Great job! Hooray for the update! I'm scared of the ending though-I don't want it to end D: But update soon! Great job, I love how descriptive you are as well.
Ahh so I don't know where to start! In all honesty, after reading the first chapter of this story, I was disappointed to find it was another All Time Low story. Don't get me wrong, I have nothing against them; it's just most people who write about them on mibba have shitty grammar and come up with the stupidest plots. Once I got to the next chapter, though, I grew to love it. Your characters have so much depth, and this is far from 'just another fanfic.' I adore Chapters 11+16 especially, for the descriptions, and especially insight into Cassie's mind, and also a myriad of wise advice that inspired me! Thank you also for setting Ben straight because I know how it feels to be completely powerless with a guy, and how intoxicating/horrible it is to deal with. Personally, I think Cassie should end up with Zack, naturally of course, but then again the ending should be your decision. Thanks again for writing so well, and restoring my faith in humanity a bit. Sorry if this takes ages to read!
Not going to lie I did a little happy dance at the end of this. I'm glad she is done with Ben now to deal with what Zack was talking about and Alex is still ever present in her love life. Next few chapter are going to be intense.