When Angels Cry Blood. - Comments

OMFG. I lurve dis storeh.
You should make a sequel or somehing, seriously. I love this one. :cheese:

hmfs, that's AMAZING! It made me so sad to see them both die, maybe because I'm a fan of the current Gee and Frank, but I mean that's absolute GENIOUS compare to the other things on here... I mean, the Civil War Ferard? AWESOME! It's the greatest, and I loved the ending, mostly because I actually LIVE in South Carolina, and hear about that damned war more than anyone, but... poision... and a blade... you're great. absolutely fucking GREAT! I LOVE IT! *huggles*.

These tears in my eyes are seeping out the words you've drenched into one page, and it's beautiful to think about. The sorrow dripping off the silky letters are phenomenal and just pretty to think about. You really got those emotions tossed into a mixture of purity as well as tear wrenching antics. Man. I started this comment a long time ago, got rid of it's feelings, and now that I'm back, I can feel the horror of the written words all over again.

I can't say anything, really. I mean. That ending. It was so draining. Awful. But perfect.

5 stars

I LOVE THE STORY MORE

Jeez, this is such an original frerard!
Aww but poor Gee died. and then Frankie killed himself.
Well at least they'll be together in heaven, and they both died out of love. x_x

aw...that was so sad! he thought he was alive!!!!!!!!!!

but he wasnt...he was dead.

*cry*

and frank killed himself...sad. he stabbed himself n the stomach! ouch...

oh, and drank poison...

One last thing, You killed them both!!! How could you?!?? lol
At least their together :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

It was a good story, but I think they should have had more Ferard moments, god I live for those lol. But I did really like it. The plot was great, I liked the fact that it was in the past and different than the others. Well the ones I've read, until now lol.
If you want me to read another one, ask and I'll get to it! :D

~Gee

400th post, ftw!

Go rape a Wentz.
You just ended my favorite story ever.
I hate you.


“Merry Christmas, Happy Hanukkah, Happy New Year and Happy Birthday…” He continued on the list of holidays, waving his hand around as he walked away.
I'm not sure they would do that in the 1800's....

And oh my gosh oh my gosh. The ending was like...perfect.
Like...woah....
It's...so sad....tragik, even.


I smiled contently.
Now I was finally be free.
That line made me tear. Seriously.

At least they'll be together in death
(sequel, hint hint.)

-cries due to end-
I loved it and always will...
<3

Damn it! The fucking Grinch stole my fucking avatar. I swear. He's dead. He's just dead for that. I want my avatar back. D= He's DEAD! <--- I am Holiday spirited. Sorry. I just drank a bunch of soda to keep me up all night. It's Christmas and I'm writing a new story. I'm sad yours is ending. It'll make me sad to go through updates one day, and this not be on the list.

I would’ve been killed if a soldier from my unit hadn’t jumped in front of it just in time. The thought of a stranger dying for me gave me goose bumps up and down my pale, limp arms.

That's horrible. He almost died and he had to watch some person die in his place. /= And that letter. It made me cry. It honestly did. It was adorable AND it was sad. I was thinking: "What if he never comes back, then, what happens? What if his dad takes the letter and burns is?" And God is a jerk sometimes. By the way, I liked that you wrote the letter in sloppy hand writing with mis used words. It made it very believable.

No. Gerard? Stay alive.. Please.

And and and;
for anyone that actually cares or liked this story, I'm a new one like it.
Called They'll Tear Us Apart If You Give Them The Chance

Same idea [racism]
Only now I know the golden rules of writing.
[sentence structure]
And I know to write with more detail now.

Hopefully this time I make way less mistakes than I have with this one.
I seem to have made loads of mistakes over the past year or so -___-
which is why I deleted basically all of my stories.
Well, whatever.

Yeah, everyone was probably expecting a happy ending >___>
But! I always write happy endings (almost always) so I decided to expand my horizons and have a sad, death filled ending.
Death filled?
But only Gerard died?
You shall see ;D

aw i'm gonna cry he got shot and he's never gonna see frank again and frank's never gonna see him again aw it's just so saddddd

MAKE IT HOME TO FRANKIE, GEE!!

Fuck you, I don't mean to be rude but thats what I said when Gerard died. How could you have him die? What is Frank going ot say/do? Come on write the last chapter, wait the last chapter?

~Gee

-first one to cry about Gerard-
GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERARRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRDDDDDDDD
YOU CAN'T DIE UNTIL YOU IMPREGNATE FRANK WITH A 19TH CENTURY BABY!!
-cries-
Yeah, I knew this would happen....SO!
-cries some more-
and -points to comment above me- I told her to make his dad a bee-otch.

And yes Danielle, let us Wentz.

electrifyed.:

YAY. A FOURTH STAR.
*feels special & loved*
(:

LETS MAKE BISCUITS.

GIRQUOTEGIRQUOTEGIRQUOTE!!!!!!!!!!

And you deserve that fourth star, just so you know. And those mistakes... there's no problem with them. When you finish a chapter, strip it down into paragraphs and read them out loud, trying to make notice of the errors you make. Or get a moderator or friend to help you edit it. Either of those work. They did for me, though now I tend to make changes right after I finish the whole story.

“Gerard,” His sigh was long and drawn out, “I’m signing you up for Lee’s army.”
“What?” I quickly sputtered, totally taking back and aghast at the idea of fighting for the Confederates, and basically just fighting in general. This war was full of blood and hardship and the casualties were insanely high. I couldn’t kill anyone, especially if they were fighting for the North, where Frank and me truly belong.

No! Gerard. ]= That's nonsense and just horrible. Gerard wouldn't be able to kill anybody, I agree with his thoughts, and also, Frank being from the side he has to fight against won't help take the weight of guilt off his head and shoulders and make him feel better /at all/. His dad is even more horrible than he's been.

Poor Gerard. /=

YAY. A FOURTH STAR.
*feels special & loved*
(:

LETS MAKE BISCUITS.