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  • Dancing.In.Graves

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    Awww.

    As much as I loved this... I gotta say I was a little sad to read it.

    I mean, it's the end... and we both know I tend to get a bit sentimental when the closing of a story comes around.

    But yeah. Other than the fact that this was the last chapter... I absolutely adored it. Chris was freakin' adorable, what with his 'I scared Gramma and Grampa' and then the 'Oh hey... these look like they'd be good to wake mommy and daddy up' with the drumsticks.

    *Sighs*

    All around it was just a super cuute chapter.

    *Nods*

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    March 2nd, 2010 at 03:31am
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    I loved this one.

    Really and truly.

    But why is it poor Matt is always in mortal peril? That depresses me, you know. It really does.

    Thank god I got some super-human powers in this one and can keep him from dying... otherwise?

    Otherwise, you'd have a very unhappy me to deal with.

    *Nods*

    Hehe... and finally JB's horrific experience a la moi was exposed. It really wasn't very nice of me to do was it?

    *Shrugs*

    Oh well.

    Ana really does need to have a little chat with her daughter about telling people things like 'You're pregnant' before they have any clue themselves. Lol. It's a bit unsettling. Now I know how Gena felt.

    At least Matt's mom took it well, though. Hopefully his dad warms up to the whole 'Matt's married' thing by the time his grandbaby is born. Things might be a wee bit awkward if he doesn't.

    *Nods*

    Sooo.

    I wanna know what's next...

    Even though that's going to mark the end...

    So... hurry and update.

    Kay?

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    February 28th, 2010 at 04:41am
  • Dancing.In.Graves

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    Yayy!

    An update!

    I've been waiting fer this, you know.

    Yeah, yeah, yeah.

    I know.

    I'm always waiting fer them. So what?

    *Grins*

    Anyways... I loved it. It was freakin' epic.

    And Val's freak out... entirely justified... but at the same time... kinda not. She pushed me and Matt together, and now she's spazzing out because we got hitched in Vegas? *shrugs* I dunno. I guess I just don't see why she's freaking out so much when she was the one that was in such a rush to get us together...

    Oh well.

    At least she's calmed down about it now.

    And someone just had to go and find one of the graves didn't they? Dammit. Nosey ass people. Can't leave things be... and now we've gotta bump up what we've gotta do so no one gets hurt lookin' fer more and stumbling across Brook's grave.

    *Sighs*

    Just can't leave things alone can they?

    *Shakes head*

    Well at least Val's not so pissed off at me anymore. She's telling everyone to calm their spaztastic asses down on my behalf.

    Buut... yeah.

    I loved it.

    Update soon.

    Mmkays?

    Mmmkay.

    <333
    February 21st, 2010 at 04:00am
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    So yeah...

    I loved it.

    Really and truly...

    And the way my mom reacted was hilarious. Though I gotta say, it seems as though she took it a little better than Matt's parents. Which I'm totally thankful for. I was really expecting her to ask, or at the very least think, that I got pregnant and that's why I showed up married all of the sudden.

    But that ending?

    Yeah. It's not cutting it.

    You know how I feel about cliffhangers. And don't you dare go and bring up TAALS because that cliffy doesn't count. It can go where ever you want it to from there. You just have to write the next chapter.

    *Nods*

    So yeah.

    Like I said, don't bring up the epic cliffy I wrote at the end of the last chapter of TAALS because it doesn't count. Like at all.

    Not.

    One.

    Single.

    Bit.

    *glares*

    I want an update.

    Like now.

    Right now.

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    February 13th, 2010 at 09:32pm
  • Dancing.In.Graves

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    Ahhh.

    This chapter was epic. Seriously.

    I mean, come on, Matt just shows up at his parents house like 'Congratulate me! I'm Married!' and they don't even know he's been dating anyone since Val died. Lol. Can't really blame them for looking at me like 'Who the hell are you?'. I would be wondering the same thing.

    Hopefully his dad'll get over the 'Not Happy' thing and accept it like his mom has. I mean, I don't expect miracles by any means, but a little more nice-ness would be good. Lol.

    Oh god... and now we get to go and give my mom the news...

    *crosses fingers*

    Please don't let JB blab before I get the chance... otherwise... I will have Jimmy chuck a knife in his direction. *Nods* Seriously.

    I mean, it's not like I've told her anything about what's been going on in my life for the last two months apparently, if she doesn't know I've met the rest of my Dad's family and all. Okay... so not the rest, but you get what I mean. And then I'm dropping the whole 'Hey mom, I know you didn't know I was dating anyone or anything, but I'm married!' thing on her too... *shakes head*

    Apparently I like the surprise factor.

    Lol.

    Well...

    I can't wait fer the next one...

    Should be amazing...

    Like it always is.

    Update it soon...

    Mmkay?

    <333
    January 29th, 2010 at 07:49am
  • Dancing.In.Graves

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    Dude.

    I love it.

    The entire thing was absolutely epic. Fer seriousness. I love how we all were just like 'Dude... let's get married' after Gena and Zack did. It made me laugh. And it all started cause Michelle was being a total girl and cried when they kissed.

    And drunken JB suggesting Matt and I get married, and then not remembering the next morning? Priceless. Seriously. I had so much fun writing that conversation. It made me giggle. Esepecially with Jimmy chucking the plate and JB's head fer me. *Nods*

    Hehe. Trust Kaila to let the whole world know that Ana and Johnny got hitched. Not that they care, obviously. Lol. It was really cute how she just ran out of the house screeching 'Mommy! Daddy!' though. I mean, ridiculously cute.

    I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to the fact that we're all married. That should definitely be interesting. Especially where Matt's concerned. I'm betting that one's gonna throw every one off. Waay off.

    *Nods*

    So yeah.

    It was effin' rad.

    I want some more.

    Soon?

    Yeah.

    Soon.

    Lol.

    <333
    January 15th, 2010 at 02:16am
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    Haha.

    Seriously. It may have been a short update, but I loved it regardless.

    Looks like Jimmy's a freak too. He fits right in with me and Ana. Lol. I gotta admit... being able to move shit with your mind is a pretty awesome power to have. Pretty damn useful too. *Nods*

    Hehe. And Leana's known for a while, or at least suspected. At least now she knows she's not hallucinating. *Grins*

    Looks like Matt finally caught on to that whole 'Take care of your crying girlfriend' thing. Good for him. He was gonna have to learn how to deal with it eventually, after all. Best to get it outta the way now. *Nods*

    Why Am I not surprised that they walk into Ana's house looking like they just fucked? Oh... that's right. Cause they did. Hehe.

    Lmao.

    I love how Jimmy tells them he's telekinetic so nonchalantly. Makes me giggle.

    But yeah.

    Like I said... I loved it.

    Seriously.

    Update it.

    Soon.

    *Nods*

    I lurve yew.

    XD

    <333
    January 7th, 2010 at 10:04am
  • Dancing.In.Graves

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    Ahh.

    I loved it.

    Was totally not expecting that demon thing at the beginning though. Way to throw me off. *Nods*

    And then, I finally get back and start getting interrogated? My day is just awesome. Lol. Damn cop... had me freaking out... and over nothing. What a jerk. *shakes head*

    Aww. Cuute. Couples fluff. First Johnny and Ana and then Zack and Gena. They're all ridiculously vomit inducing. Mmhmm. They are.

    I'm not gonna comment the bit I wrote. After all... kinda redundant. I will, however, state that I totally see me and Michelle bonding. We suddenly have quite a bit in common. Both are involved with rockstars, both of us had sisters, both of our sisters were killed by the same douche fuck of a ghost... see where I'm going with this? Lol.

    But yeah.

    This was an epic update.

    Can't wait for the next one.

    <333
    December 23rd, 2009 at 11:47am
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    I love this story. I just started reading it today. Update soon please!
    December 18th, 2009 at 10:29am
  • MsSynnieVengeance

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    Oh snap... poor matt having to go through this twice.... hopefully everything turns out for the best
    December 18th, 2009 at 08:03am
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    Arrgh!

    Stupid fuckin' ghost brother.

    I hate him. Really, I do.

    What the fuck does he think he's doing running around, killin' people? Seriously. It's getting to be a bit fuckin' ridiculous. *Nods*

    And poor, poor Matt. Hale really is doing a number on him. Going around, killing and/or attempting to kill his girlfriends. What the hell is that? Crap. That's what it is. And this time its even messier 'cause it can't just be explained away. I mean, at least when Val died it was in the hospital and could be blamed on complications to her injury, no Mya is just flat out dead, shot even, and there's no way to explain that one.

    Seriously. If Hale wasn't already dead, I'd fuckin' kill him.

    Maybe we could resurrect him so I can do that?

    Nah... too fuckin' messy.

    Oh lookit that. Matt knows the cop.

    Unexpected.

    Useful though. Very useful. Maybe now they stand half a chance of being able to explain this without being looked at like they're full of shit. *Nods*

    So yeah. It was a short chapter... but I loved it all the same.

    I want more.

    Soon...

    *Grins*

    <333
    December 18th, 2009 at 07:49am
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    Love this story girlie... I cannot wait for some more
    December 16th, 2009 at 02:39pm
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    Duude.

    I fucking loved this one. Seriously. It was friggin' epic! Every single part of it. *Nods*

    It was absopositivelutely amazzing. *grins*

    The dialogue was fun, I still can't believe that JB and Megan were totally flirting with each other when we're trying to take care of such a serious matter. Soo not the time for eye-fucking. Lol. And then we all go and get so fucking sidetracked that it's not funny. We should really stop that shouldn't we? Hehe. Ahh well. Not entirely our fault. If anything, we'll blame it on JB and Megan. They're the ones who started us down that path by flirting with each other.

    I'm really good at the blame game, aren't I?

    *smirks*

    Seriously.

    Hale is a fucking douche. And who the fuck does he think he is, threatening to shoot me. Yeah... we'll fucking see about that, no good, mental, baby-murdering, asshole. Yeah... I totally just called him that. You can pretend to be shocked if you wanna, but we both know that you're not. Hehe.

    The dude is a fucking creeper though, that much is obvious.

    I want updates.

    Very soon.

    Mostly cause I want some damn answers.

    Well more anyway.

    <333
    December 16th, 2009 at 11:36am
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    Hahaha.

    I loved this one. It made me laugh. Seriously.

    Which actually didn't feel great, since I feel like shit. It's okay though. I forgive you. *Nods*

    Wow... they all seem tense. Can't say I blame them. Does anyone want to go back in that house after all the shit that's happened in there? No? Not surprising. Bad shit happens there. I wouldn't blame Ana if she sold that hell hole. *Shakes head*

    Oh look at that. I'm there... with my captive... I mean sister. Yeah... sister. *Grins*

    What the hell? Why are they assuming there's something going on between me and JB just because he showed up with me? Even if he wasn't my cousin, he could totally just be a friend. And of course Matt's the first out the door. That's not gonna be pretty...

    Oh thank god for Val. At least she's attempting to make sure no one dies on Zack's front lawn. Lol.

    Great... Matt's fucking pissed. *shakes head* And for no reason... Oh. Wow. JB's right... that's one hell of a greeting. Then again, Val just died, it's a bit reasonable that Matt's a bit territorial when it comes to the new girlfriend. *Nods* Yeah.

    I love how JB starts an argument with Mya by calling her a hermit too. He's on a roll huh? Hehe. First Matt and the guys (though admittedly, the guys aren't pissed anymore) and now the bitchy sister. *giggles*

    Ha.

    There I go calling Matt out on the jealousy, while finding it just a bit cute at the same time. As is evident by the surprised look on my face. Hehe... I like how he tries to deny it, with Mya right there at that, never mind the fact that his actions are making it super obvious even if I can't read him. Ahh. Now we fill him in... and he goes from super pissed off to...

    Horny... in the span of about five seconds. Hehe.

    I like it.

    Now it's time to scar the cousin and sister for life...

    *grins*

    Holy purple penguins Batman!

    I got a read on Matt!

    ... And of course it was a glimpse at his kinky thoughts concerning me. I'm just that talented. Lol.

    Haha. I like how JB goes 'Big fucking deal... you, literally, read his mind. You do it all the fucking time'. Hehe. *shakes head* Not with Matt I don't.

    Ahh crap. I had the same thing happen with the douche brother? Thank fucking god Matt's not a homicidal, baby killin', maniac like Hale was. I'd never live that down. Seriously. Can you imagine having everyone tell you that you have awful taste in men for all of eternity. Or at least until you were to deaf or cenile to hear/care what they said? And you couldn't argue... 'cause there's no fuckin' counter argument to that. Not a single one.

    Haha... and now to force Mya into the one house she wishes she could avoid for forever. Not that any of us are about to let her. We have six very muscular men more than willing to carry and/or drag her ass in there if she chooses to fight it. *Smirks* How very grown up of her, by the way, dragging her feet like that's gonna keep us from making her go there. Yeah right.

    Huh.

    Odd confrontation between the sister and Cara.

    Wonder what that was all about.

    Another fucking demon?!? Fantastic. And Mya is choosing that moment to act like a freakin' moron. Even better. *rolls eyes* She really is useless isn't she.

    Hehe. I love how Megan just pulls the knife out like it's an everyday occurrence. And her explaination is even better.

    So yeah.

    I think you know what I'm getting ready to say...

    I want an update... soon.

    *grins*

    <333
    December 12th, 2009 at 08:08am
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    Soo.

    Chapter nine was pretty epic wasn't it?

    Like I said... I really impressed myself with that one.

    One of my favorite lines was the bit about hearing Mya's thought from the Starbucks.

    *Grins*

    You know I had to throw in my coffee addiction in there somehow. And besides... its not like Mya wasn't being a bitch and didn't deserve it.

    How'd you like that bit about the baby locks on the doors so she couldn't escape anyway? I had to... I just didn't see her giving in that easily.

    JB's reaction to Val was pretty awesome too, huh?

    Anyway... I hope you were as totally happy with that one as I was. Because yeah... I don't think that it could have turned out better.

    Can't wait to see where you go with it from there...

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    December 6th, 2009 at 03:08am
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    Yay!

    I've only been waiting for this all day. *pouts*

    It's cool though. I have it now. Hehe. And now instead of wasting time rambling about absolutely nothing, as we both know I'm very capable of doing (not to mention I'm really fucking good at it) when I so choose.

    Yummm.

    Naked Matt.

    I love Matt. But I especially love naked Matt.

    *Nods*

    Aww. Super, super cuute. Seriously. We both know the beginning was fluffy. There's no denying it. But hey... you redeemed it by following all the super cuute, rot your teeth out of your head, adorable fluff with a healthy dose of wake up sex. Wake up sex makes everything better. *Grins widely*

    Hehe. Kaila knows something. And obviously Angelique does too. What the hell are those two hiding from us? *Raises eyebrow*

    I still feel bad for Megan... she's the only single one, well aside from Angelique and Kaila, but then again, Kaila's a baby and Angelique is just... old. They're expected to be single. Hehe.

    Ha. Val and her showing up outta the blue really does crack me up. And the fact that she does it mostly because she's bored makes it just that much more epic. Hehe. Trying to push her off on Jimmy and Leana. Well... a lot of good that'll do since, you know, they're at the front door now.

    I love how it's just now sinking in with Leana that Val's ghost really is there to stay for a while. You know, hang out, help get rid of fuckin' douche bag ghost Hale, and make sure Matt gets over her as quickly as possible. That's a lot on her agenda considering she's dead now.

    Haha. Now she's explaining why it is that we can't do much about taking care of what we were supposed to take care of the day before. Before we knew that Mya and I needed to be there at Brook's grave when we went to investigate it.

    Preoccupied.

    That's one way of putting it. Yeah.

    *Grins*

    Oh god... I'm not gonna say it. You can't make me. I refuse...

    Awwww. Poor Michelle.

    God fucking dammit. You made me say it. Stupid girl moments. I guess its forgivable though, because she is really depressed about her sister. Not that you can blame her... I'm sure I'd be just as depressed if my twin sister had just died. That's right Brian go and comfort her like the good boyfriend you are.

    He proposed... how sweet. And Val was there to see it... that's even better. It's nice she still gets to be there for all those big moments in her sister's life, even if she is dead. And by be there, I mean actually right there, not watching from somewhere up in the clouds or where ever.

    Hehe. I like how Val is so dead set on getting her revenge against my nut job brother. Don't blame her... shit, I'm hell bent on getting rid of his ass too.

    Haha. Leana is the one that get's to harass us into getting up outta bed? Why am I not all that surprised. Oh, that's right, 'cause its entirely something she would do. The threat to come over and force us out was a nice touch too. Lol.

    Alright. I'm outta here. Can't wait for more... and by more I mean chapter ten.

    Not nine.

    *Grins*

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    December 6th, 2009 at 03:00am
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    Soo. Here I am.

    Commenting the last one I'm behind on here. Lol.

    About fucking time don't you thing? Yeah... that's what I thought. Then again... at least I comment.

    *Stares accusingly at other readers*

    Oh yeah. That's right. I totally just went there kids. If you like this ficcy (or any of the others for that matter) Fucking tell her... try and take up some space on these message boards. They don't have to be novels like mine are. Just a line or two. It'll make her day.

    And now that I'm done bitching at all the other readers for their serious lack of support here, I'll get back to what it was that I was supposed to be doing in the first place. Commenting. Yeaah.

    *Grins*

    Seriously. This chipper Val ghost fucking cracks me up. Mostly because the last thing I expect her to be is cheerful when she just died so suddenly. But maybe that's just me. Doubt it, but maybe. At least she's helpful though. *Nods* Much better than her just standing around and being all 'Hey I'm a ghost... Matt date the cute red head... I'm just gonna stick around and watch your existence' because at that point it'd probably be kind of annoying. Like I said though, that's not the case... she's being really helpful and we should all be very thankful for that. At least now the teams are a little more evenly matched as far as ghostly counterparts go. Sure Hale has demons... but we've got a really, really fucking resentful Val who I can only imagine is hellbent on getting back at him for killing her. God knows I would be if I were in her shoes.

    Lol. Silly Matt. Where exactly does he think Brian and Michelle got a concrete X? Does he think they carry them around in their back pockets or something? I dunno that it'd fit there. Yeah. I know. I'm being a smart ass. I do it well though. *Grins*

    Fucking phone. Why did it have to go and ring so loudly and scare the hell out of us like that. It wasn't very nice. As if we weren't all strung out and paranoid about the things that go bump in the night (regardless of the fact that it may, technically, not be night) as it is. Noo. Zacky has to go and fucking call, giving us four a fucking heart attack in the process. Jerk. Just you wait... I'm going to return that favor. I don't know how or when, but I'm gonna because payback's a bitch. That and he totally deserves it after that.

    Lmao.

    Apparently Val feels the need to scare the piss outta Johnny and Ana too. Well... at least she doesn't discriminate. Hehe. She has a point though. Johnny's totally cool about her appearing outta thin air, just not with her doing it without some sort of warning before she speaks. Can't really blame him for that though. I mean... they are all sorta on edge... and you never know if my dick of a brother has gained enough strength to get out of the attic or not so he's definitely something we've got to worry about.

    Oh. So we have every reason to be paranoid about going out there huh? I mean, there's something off about Brook's grave site. I wonder what it is. And why the fuck do we need Mya? Dammit. I don't wanna have to deal with her and her bitchin'. *Pouts* If the bitch starts with me can I hit her? I mean... sure... she'll have to really get under my skin and all before I do... but can I? I'd enjoy it. Immensely. *Nods eagerly*

    Think about it.

    Lol.

    Wow. Gena's irked that Val didn't cause her to have a heart attack? Pfft. Yeah. Crazy pregnant woman. Only she would be pissed about not being included in that.

    See. I know that calling Mya is gonna be a pain in the fucking ass. She's gonna be a bitch about it and I can only imagine that I'm. literally, gonna be dragging her fucking ass outta her house and to that park. And I'll do it too. More than willingly. *Smirks*

    Yay. Matt and me fluff. My favorite! Lol.

    *Points at you*

    Don't you roll your eyes and laugh at me.

    You knew I was gonna say that.

    I always say that. Mostly cause it's always true.

    Hehe. Matt remembered what he said while he was doped up. Cuute. Damn right I'm not an angel. I should think our actions the night before would tell anyone with half a brain that. Besides... it's no fun being all innocent and pious. *Shakes head*

    Haha. Didn't I just say something about hoping that Kaila's visions stayed G rated? Yeah, I totally did. Like two comments ago. Apparently Johnny shares my sentiments about that. Can't really blame him... she is only two after all.

    Yeah... anyways. I want some more of this. Soon. Very soon.

    *Nods*

    Because I am in some serious love with this ficcy.

    And you know it.

    <333
    December 2nd, 2009 at 10:55pm
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    I gotta say.

    I love how this chappy got straight to business. There was no fucking around and building up to the good stuff. Oh no. Not this time. It's the first thing that you hit.

    Of course I noticed her looking at those papers. I mean how the fuck could I not. She kept glancing at them like they were gonna eat her or something. So damn right I'm gonna ask about it. I'm fucking nosy. Lol.

    Wow. Is it just me or was Gena just a wee bit bitchy about that? The hormones have apparently already kicked in with her. Guess its safe to say we have been warned not to piss her off while she's knocked up. I sure as fuck don't wanna be dealing with that.

    Aww. That's sweet... Matt's trying to protect me from those papers. Even if those are the only words he's said to me since... well, since before we fell asleep.

    Oh. That is so seriously fucked up in the head. He buried those little girls in a fucking park. And not just any park... but the fucking park where I have childhood memories! Why do I get the feeling that wasn't just any sort of fucking coincidence and that I play a much larger role in this than any of us thought before? I mean really, of all the parks in southern California... there's a reason he chose that one. Vindictive fucker. I really, really hate him.

    *glares at the stupid ghost*

    Oh. So there's a gateway in the house and something possessed Hale. I highly doubt that's all that there is to him being an absolute nut job. But maybe I'm just bitchy about it all because he tried to off Matt. How the fuck is him being nuts our dad's fault anyway. Never mind what happened at that house after he died. I mean seriously. He fuckin' told them not to sell the place and they didn't fucking listen. Yeah. You know what that is... that's Mya feeling guilty for not listening to dear old dad and selling the place. Lucky me. At least I get to live without the knowledge that I'm basically the reason someone's dead. I told her not to sell the place. It's what she gets for listening to that crazy brother of ours.

    Pfft. If its Ana's birthday then she can do whatever the fuck she wants to. Even if it's looking for the unmarked graves of babies that some lunatic decided to go and kill. It's her party after all. Wow. Hehe. Poor Megan. She gets left out of all the good stuff. We're gonna have to find her a boyfriend. *Nods*

    I vote JB. I dunno why... but I do.

    Well its about time Matt and Michelle talk to each other about seeing Val and all. Hehe, all while Brian and I just walk along with them and watching as they spin around in circles trying to find Val or what not.

    Haha. I like how they're still going its not possible that Val's around. Uhm. Newsflash. Totally possible. Otherwise... we wouldn't be having this issue with Hale and his demon summoning ass. *shakes head* Hehe and now they're bitching because they know that she would fuck with their heads like that.

    I was behaving myself eh? Go me. Then again... I don't particularly enjoy being able to delve into everyone's thoughts all the time do I? Ahh. Peace and quiet. That's nice. I mean... sure I bet Matt's feeling a bit nervous about all of that... but I don't get all his feelings and thoughts bombarding me now do I? Oh jeeze. Figures those sparks would become pesky little reminders of really good sex that I'm trying awful hard to forget about because I maybe feel a bit guilty about drunkenly taking advantage of a rather vulnerable Matt. Wow. I never thought I'd say that. Ever.

    Hehe. And now its time to get as far away from him as possible without it looking suspicious so that I can mentally berate myself. Sounds perfectly reasonable to me. *Nods*

    Haha! I love how Val just pops up all cheerful and shit. When we're looking for dead babies no less. Entirely inappropriate of her. Looks like we have that in common. Inappropriate actions at the worst times possible.

    God. I know I helped with this conversation. But it still makes me grin. Poor Matt... his head is being seriously fucked with here. I mean, his recently deceased girlfriend's ghost is telling him to go out and ask me on a date. I can only imagine how surreal that is.

    Hehe. And Matt's nervousness about just how much of the night before Val saw. *giggles* As if he didn't have enough to deal with.

    That dirty, sneaking, ghostly Val. What'd she have to go and trip me for? What if Matt hadn't caught me and I'd broken a leg or something. Then where would that leave us? With Matt carrying me back to the car so we could go to the hospital... because there's no way I could set my own leg in order to heal it.

    Hehe. Figures. As soon as Matt and I are having a moment Michelle and Brian show up. We've got some awesome luck don't we? Totally sarcastic there. As if you couldn't tell anyway. *Grins*

    Looks like Matt's not the only one who's shocked that Val is pushing us together. Then again, can you really blame me? It's not exactly the reaction you expect from the girlfriend after all. Hell in all those lame movies the girlfriend typically wants the new girl way out of the picture. Not all comfy and cozy with the boyfriend.

    Oh well. I'll stop here... and maybe go leave comments for some other things... you know... take a breather from AHT before I dive into the next one. Lol.

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    December 2nd, 2009 at 04:59am
  • Dancing.In.Graves

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    God.

    I love this story. I mean, really and truly. I absolutely adore it to teeny bits and pieces. *Nods earnestly* And I love it even more when it's updated so quickly. Lol. That also means that I'm not gonna do the typical thing that I normally do and ramble for three hours before I actually start commenting on this chapter.

    Why you ask?

    Because... I'm feeling generous.

    And because I got a mass amount of updates today.

    It's only fair. *Nods*

    Ahh. Opening up with me and Matt. Well I guess its technically more Matt and me at the moment since I'm still asleep. Great. He feels guilty. That's gonna do wonders for my confidence levels. I mean, I get where he's coming from, but... okay. Its just a wee bit frustrating. Damn all that alcohol. I think after I wake up I'm gonna need another drink.

    Oh look at that. Val is popping up in the back yard now. The morning after Matt and I had really great sex that he now feels entirely guilty about. I think I'm ready to crawl under a rock now.

    Okay. So I know I said it was probably a refreshing thing, not being able to read Matt and all, but I think in a situation like the current one, that ability would be really, really fucking useful. What I'm trying to say here is that I think that thought totally just came and bit me on the ass.

    Hehe. Yeah. Mind reading during sex... I can definitely see how that could totally take me hot and bothered to colder than ice in about two seconds flat. I mean seriously. Can you imagine that? One second you're totally into it and the next he thinks something that totally turns you off and you're pushing him off of you making some excuse about how you have to be a work early or how you really have to go because you forgot you needed to water your house plants, depending on whether your hooking up at his place or yours.

    Yeah. In case you weren't sure. Not fun. At all.

    Wow. As if the awkward wasn't amped up to a ridiculously high level already its getting progressively worse as I lay in his bed, without clothes on, mentally bitching at myself for sleeping with someone who is so very obviously not over his dead girlfriend. Not that I expect him to be or anything, but yeah... I guess it's just a bit on the frustrating side.

    Wow. Go us. We're just trying to make things as weird as possible aren't we. I mean, not a single word spoken between us? Not even a 'Good morning'? Good god. He and I are going about this is the exact opposite way from how we should be dealing with it. Then again... I suppose it just wouldn't be any fun if we didn't, would it?

    Oh thank you god. A break from the awkward interaction between Matt and I.

    At the moment. Zack/Gena fluff is definitely preferred.

    Wow.

    Did I actually just say that?

    *Checks*

    Holy hell. I did. I never thought I'd say I preferred reading about Zack and Gena over Matt and I? *Shakes head*

    I'm just full of surprises aren't I?

    Anyways though. I'm pretty sure I've said it before, but those two are seriously cute in this one. I mean, really and truly. Aww. Party time for Ana. Hehe. And she doesn't know about it. I'd like to see someone try and throw me a surprise party. So far... Matt's the only one that'd be able to pull it off... and even then, he'd have to wait to tell everyone else and hope they weren't busy. Yeah. That's right. Telekinesis ruins a lot of peoples fun. Lol.

    Aww. Poor Michelle. Nightmares fucking suck. Seriously. Aww. Brian is rather sweet about it though. Yeah. That is probably the worst dream she could have had. I mean, its bad enough that her sister died and all, but to experience it from Val's point of view... yeah. That'd just be fuckin' awful.

    God. You know, that fuckin' douche of a ghost that is my brother fucked up a lot of people's lives in this one... I know I've said that before, but really. He did. I mean, he's running around killin' people and trying to kill people. What's next, possession? All I have to say is the fucker better stay far away from me if that's what he wants to do. Everyone's all depressed and shit and its all his fucking fault. Arrgh.

    Oh jeeze. If I puke due to obscene amounts of cute shared between Johnny and Ana I'm blaming you. *Nods* I mean seriously... those two are so close to being disgustingly adorable that I usually have to check for cavities after reading anything where those two are concerned. Aww. Baby babbling is so cute. I mean really, it's just, yeah. It has me going 'Daww' far more often than is necessary. Pretty dreams huh?

    Pretty dreams involving Matt? I hope to god those were G rated dreams.

    *Looks innocent*

    Okay. Yeah. Johnny and Ana need to stop. My teeth are actually starting to hurt at this point. So yeah... I order them to stop being so goddamned cute.

    Aww. Poor Megan. Apparently Angelique likes to inadvertently give her a hard time too. Well at least I'm not the only one the old woman does it to. Next thing you know she's gonna start in on Leana too. I figure she'll leave Gena and Michelle alone. I mean, Gena's preggo and Michelle's sister just died. That sorta keeps Matt safe from any attack as well. Leaves me, Megan, Leana, Jimmy, and Brian out in the open though. Damn. Oh well.

    Matt won't even look at me now? I'd like to say that I'm surprised by that, but I'm not. And even less surprised that I'm doing the exact same thing. And now Ana's catching on to something. Dammit. Hehe. She's gone to find Kaila. *Sighs* For someone who can read minds... I sure am outta the fucking loop, you know.

    But yeah... I'm gonna get to commenting my other two chapters... and then head off to comment SLIYSL and Forever... *nods excitedly*

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    December 1st, 2009 at 01:52am
  • Dancing.In.Graves

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    Ahh. How I love fast updates.

    Seriously. I know I tell you that regularly... but I really and truly do love them. They make me smile.

    *Nods*

    Especially when they're updates for stories I'm mildly (okay so we both know that it's a bit more than just mildly but shhh. Let's keep that to ourselves) obsessed with. And fer seriousness... I love this one. I have since you posted it. Then again... I'm pretty sure you knew that... mostly cause I'm almost positive that I've already told you that. Lol.

    *Sighs*

    I guess its time to start answering questions, huh? Looks like I have some more confessing to do. God... I almost feel like a naughty catholic school girl. Put me in pigtails and a plaid skirt and I'll look the part too. *Grins* Don't give me that look. You knew I'd say something like that as soon as I mentioned the the school girl thing. It just wouldn't be me if I didn't.

    Hehe. I think its cute how Matt's so impressed that Ana kicked that demon's ass. As if that should be surprising. I mean, c'mon, the girl is hispanic and related to me... of course she can kick ass and take names. *Nods* And the fact that after we all laugh at what he said Angelique entirely disregards what was said and was like 'You fought a demon and weren't wounded... uh huh. Riight...' lol. It made me laugh.

    And don't we all look the perfect picture of guilt. Like we should all be in the principal's office or something. Then again... look at our motley group... we're probably very, very used to having that look on our faces, huh? I mean, I know the boys are, and I do seem to be a bit of a trouble maker.

    Oh lookit that. I really do look a bit guilty about it all. And what's with my dear old aunt doubting my abilities as a nurse? So I'm sure she didn't mean it that way, but we all know that I can take offense to things pretty easily when I feel like being a pain in the ass, and right now, I'm in one of those moods. Lol.

    And now I'm getting the third degree about being a healer? God... I can't catch a break can I? Ah well... I'm over it. I mean, I guess I can understand why maybe she's making a big deal of it if I'm the first one in the family to have that particular gift in a few hundred years. Yeah, I suppose it is a pretty big deal. I've noticed that I'm kinda sorta set apart from everyone in a family full of freaks. Like I'm an uber freak, and apparently Ana was too! Go us! Managing to be black sheep in a family full of social outcasts. That takes some serious skill. I'm proud of us.

    What's with that cryptic warning anyway? And why'd she look at Matt like that? Is good ol' Aunt Angelique getting visions about his future too? I'm betting so. I guess what I really wanna know is what my being a healer has to do with Matt. I mean seriously, I already helped heal the gun shot wound... not much else to be done about that. *Sighs* I don't like not knowing things.

    Go. Fucking. Figure. Mya would be a bitch and tell me that I'm completely cursed. Well fuck her. She's just jealous 'cause I got the good genes in the family and didn't get saddled with being a lame ass empath. Yeah. I just went there. I really think me and my dear sister need to have a screaming match in this one. It would definitely be interesting, that's for damn sure.

    Ahh. Time to go get drunk. It's about time, and much deserved at this point. I mean seriously, the shit just keep escalating, and even though I've just recently hit the scene I can imagine that I feel some kind of guilt. After all, I had an idea what was in that house and didn't tell anyone, and now someone's dead and there have been two other attempts. Yeah. I bet I'm all too willing to help get rid of that dear brother of mine.

    Hehe. Why am I not shocked that we all knew Matt's plan was to go out and get royally fucked up? Oh, that's right 'cause he's depressed and shit because of Val. Never mind his confusion about being attracted to a certain red head even though he shouldn't be feeling anything but sadness. Yeah. I'd be planning to get drunker than fuck too.

    Ha. So Ana's the first to notice that Matt and I are leaving together and of course my dear cousin has to go and point it out to everyone. Couldn't just let us leave discreetly, could she? That's okay... she'll get hers. Lol.

    Kissing Matt is nice. Very nice. It'd be better if we weren't both drunk off our asses though. Then again, if we weren't drunk we probably wouldn't be kissing would we? Okay. I'll live with us being drunk. Kinda makes me dread the morning after though. I've got one word for you. Awkward. I'm sure that there's gonna be a healthy dose of that between the two of us when we wake up naked, together. *Nods* Oh well... hooking up with Matt is totally worth it.

    But no one better give us shit about it later.

    Aww. Cuute. Johnny and Ana fluff. Those two are ridiculously cute with one another, you know that right? I mean seriously... it almost makes me wanna puke. But I won't... because I like the two of them together. *Nods*

    Huh... so its definitely not Matt being crazy and imagining his dead girlfriend being around, because I highly doubt both he and Michelle are imagining the same exact thing when he hasn't even mentioned his suspicions to anyone else. Looks like Val is watching out for all of them. That's actually oddly comforting, knowing that she's around to help out when and if (But really we all know it's definitely when) things start to go south.

    Zacky and Gena are awfully cute together in this one too. Not quite to the degree of Johnny and Ana though. I dunno that anyone can be that annoyingly cute. Aside from them of course. Lol. Well at least Zack's mom isn't freaking out about her being pregnant, I mean, I know its a modern age and that sort of thing is a pretty regular occurrence, but it doesn't mean she couldn't be a bitch about it. 'Cause she totally could. So yeah, like I said, thank god she's actually excited about becoming a grandma.

    Jimmy and Leana. Why am I not at all surprised by those two? Oh that's right, because its those two. Besides... let's face it... I highly doubt all the stress they've been under lately has left much room for fucking. They're probably all but dying to get into one another's pants, and now they're at home, where they can go at it where ever, when ever. I say good for them... just... I hope they don't fuck on their couch because I don't wanna sit on that if they do. Lol.

    Mmkay... so yeah. I loved this. You know I loved this. *grins*

    And now... now I'm dying for the next chapter 'cause I wanna read the morning after. *Nods excitedly*

    So yeah.

    Update.

    Soon.

    Love yew!

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    November 30th, 2009 at 02:43am