The Essence of Sin - Comments

  • katie:P

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    this is amazing:) absolutely love it lols
    update soon please? haha
    June 14th, 2011 at 12:45am
  • jojo13617

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    I am addicted to this story. I just sat here and read every single chapter. Keep them coming! This story is great!
    June 12th, 2011 at 07:10pm
  • Mu-

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    Just finished the first chapter. I've got a question, though... Why's it only rated PG13 when it says in the warning thingamajig that there's sex scenes and drug use and stuff? Shouldn't it be rated a bit higher?
    June 12th, 2011 at 03:21am
  • shelbyvengeance

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    you need to update this story again. i love it alot.
    June 11th, 2011 at 10:25am
  • ASeventhHorcrux

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    Thank God! Now update again, I almost forgot about this story.
    Jared and Princess ftw. screw Caleb.
    June 10th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • kourtniiRAWR

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    So uhm , I'm definitely throwing rotten fruit at you right now. And buses .
    Jara/Kared > Karleb/Calera
    See , Jared and Kara even make cuter couple names than Kara and Caleb !!
    It's fate!

    That aside , good chapter , I'd like more and more and more and more and more ,
    But I suppose we can't always get what we want, can we?

    I still love this story, I promise , please keep writing it for us ,
    (AND GET KARA AND JARED BACK TOGETHER GEEZ)

    ^__^ ♥
    June 9th, 2011 at 09:31pm
  • mariam

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    Every time I read this again I realise why I loved it so much! I just can't get enough of it!
    Although, I still dig Kara and Jared more, but now Caleb is in the picture again I don't want him to be heartbroken either! I can't wait to see what happens :)
    June 9th, 2011 at 11:17am
  • Star Angel

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    moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore please and thank you
    June 9th, 2011 at 10:33am
  • XXCookieMonsterXX

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    Thanks for updating! that chapter was beast! xD loved it!!!! i like jared better, caleb is cute and all but jared is beast!! lol can't wait for the next update :D
    June 9th, 2011 at 07:50am
  • XXCookieMonsterXX

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    heyyy :) r you still goin to update?? please dont quit because the story is amazing and your one of the best writers i've come across on here xD
    May 29th, 2011 at 05:09am
  • XXCookieMonsterXX

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    This is so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 19th, 2011 at 05:34am
  • ASeventhHorcrux

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    Woman.
    Listen up and listen up good, kay? Kay.
    If you don't freaking update, I will find a machine gun, come to your house, and point it at your head while you update.
    Lol, just kidding.
    But please, do update.
    And like prior commenter, kill off Caleb of something. Kara and Jared all the way.
    Oh, and read my assassin story. <3
    May 15th, 2011 at 04:56am
  • gingerkidd0623

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    i cant WAIT for you to update again, i love this story!! XD
    March 24th, 2011 at 01:07am
  • kourtniiRAWR

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    WOAAAAAAH that's a long comment :O
    YAY !
    March 23rd, 2011 at 12:52am
  • kourtniiRAWR

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    You make the mustache man face too ?
    I LOVE YOU ={D

    So , I found this story on Sunday and I just finished getting myself fully caught up .
    Have to say , I love it . It's fantastic . fabulous . marvelous . wonderful . brilliant . extraordinary . divine . glorious . sensational . magnificent . awesome . splendid . stupendous . supreme . terrific . impressive . spectacular . superb . grand .

    and yes , I just totally raped a thesaurus .

    NOWWWW ,
    I would just like to say , since I started reading , l've hated Caleb . It's just been this intense , burning inferno of dislike . I don't know what's causing it , but I think he's awful .
    Jared on the other hand , well , I've loved him the entire time .

    So can you just kill off Caleb or something , make Kara really upset and then set her up with Jared again ? That would totally make my life . I love them together .

    JARA ALL THE WAY .
    Or maybe it should be Kared ... heehee that sounds like carrot ^__^
    OR OR OR , it could be Prinred or Jarcess XD

    I like Jara and Kared better though ,
    which do you prefer ? hmm ... l can't choose ....

    but yes , they need to be together . stat .

    AND AND AND ,
    you should update ,
    cos l'm so used to reading this whenever I feel like , l need new chapters to keep me going ^__^ ahaaa

    Well then , I think I'll finish my commentating there ,

    GOOD WRITING , THANKYOU FOR SHARING YOUR GOD GIVEN TALENT WITH US ALL . BLESS YOUR FACE , AND IF YOU SNEEZED WHILE READING THIS , BLESS YOU .

    yeah , l totally just ripped off tobuscus , but he's epic , so it's okay (:
    March 23rd, 2011 at 12:52am
  • CrouchingTurte

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    For the record? I'm all for Jared.
    <3 <3 <3
    March 2nd, 2011 at 06:09am
  • complexsimplicity

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    I absolutely LOVE this story!!!!!! <3
    March 2nd, 2011 at 01:56am
  • ASeventhHorcrux

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    What the FUCK? No. Post now.
    How can she like Caleb over Jared?! JARED? Dude! Fuck no.
    Poor Jared. </3
    Please post? I'll give you cookies! Or chocolate. Or a purple bear!
    March 2nd, 2011 at 12:50am
  • ASeventhHorcrux

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    “Hurry up!” he exclaimed like a little kid. “It's fucking steak!”
    -Favorite line in the whole fucking story. <3 I'm in love.
    March 1st, 2011 at 10:38pm
  • bumdiddledoo

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    I've been following this story since quizilla! I was so happy when I found it on here that I decided to just re-read it so i could catch up! I really hope you update this frequently! :)
    March 1st, 2011 at 12:24am