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  • JillValentine

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    I swear I don't get update emails anymore o.O So I had a lot to catch up on lol
    Fricken awesome as always though, Still one of my favs :D
    February 28th, 2011 at 11:59am
  • ScarletSanity

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    srry about the multiple same postings, my computer started acting goofy! or its just that excited to read all the updates.... who knows?
    February 28th, 2011 at 04:11am
  • ScarletSanity

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    i am very excited updates have been happening! i cant wait for more!
    February 28th, 2011 at 04:09am
  • ScarletSanity

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    i am very excited updates have been happening! i cant wait for more!
    February 28th, 2011 at 04:09am
  • ScarletSanity

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    i am very excited updates have been happening! i cant wait for more!
    February 28th, 2011 at 04:09am
  • ScarletSanity

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    i am very excited updates have been happening! i cant wait for more!
    February 28th, 2011 at 04:09am
  • shelbyvengeance

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    Loved the update like always. Can't wait for the next chapter!
    February 28th, 2011 at 12:35am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    I agree with Sin.D.Rella - the feces is about to hit the rotary ocillator (the shit is gonna hit the fan soon, in her words XD). I like Caleb and Kara, I admit, but again, I agree with the above: her and Jared are just better.

    The first thing when I finished this chapter wasn't F You! this time. It was "Damn it!"
    Haha. XD

    Anywho, can't wait for more! I freaking love your stories (especially SuperHero [hinthint]). :)
    February 27th, 2011 at 07:37pm
  • TheGoodLlama

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    This is going to the most awkward love triangle.
    February 27th, 2011 at 07:25pm
  • Sin.D.Rella

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    Oh my god, the shit is gonna hit the fan soon... I can't wait!! hahah, I love this story. I hope Kara and Jared get together, I mean I like Caleb and her together, but her and Jared are just better :D
    February 27th, 2011 at 05:48pm
  • Pieces.Of.Heaven.

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    haha, Love it, somehow i knew that was what was going to happen. I really want to see from Jared's POV now because im sure Kara's is just going to be mind turmoil between Caleb and Jared till she gets to see Caleb. I wanna see how mad Jared is!!
    *jumps up and down like a school girl*

    anyways thats what Jared gets for not growing balls already!! he keeps ruining any chance he has with Kara and turning her into a very unhappy unspoiled princess....and for the Princess not to be her princessey self, well we know thats no good lol.
    February 27th, 2011 at 10:13am
  • ASeventhHorcrux

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    Fuck yes. I love it. I love Princess. Only on Chapter three. No spoilers people. xD
    February 27th, 2011 at 07:31am
  • Pieces.Of.Heaven.

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    Alright seriously agreeing with XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX on this one lol. what is with the cliff hangers!

    and BESIDES the cliffhangers, you seriously had to bring CALEB back?!?!?! *hits head off of computer desk over and over*
    well if things werent already jacked up between Kara and Jared before they sure are now!

    ugh you evil and enticingly to good a writer! if only you knew what you did to our poor reading minds!
    *sniffle*
    hope you know what happens next and update soon!
    February 27th, 2011 at 04:22am
  • shelbyvengeance

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    Awesome update but why did you have to stop at a cliffhanger? =\
    February 27th, 2011 at 03:36am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

    The first thing I did when I finished this chapter was almost letting the f-bomb slip in a yell...but my parents are here and so it came out as a whisper - "F*** You!"

    I don't mean it in a mean way, obviously, but you just HAD to do something like that to me, didn't you? You're keeping me on edge now and it is absolutely killing me. I really, really want to know what happens now!!! This is even worse than the bomb!!!! GAAAAH!!!

    Until next time, you lovable biatch you :) (please do not take offense!!! I'll feel really bad. And I called you a "lovable" one, anyway! lol XD)
    February 27th, 2011 at 01:21am
  • Star Angel

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    oh snap hes back trouble is coming talk about a love try lol
    February 27th, 2011 at 01:13am
  • avant-garde.

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    D; Caleb. Don't hurt him, pleaseeee. He's my favorite. FAVORITE. And you can't hurt him. Por favor. I'm totally still reading this, even if it seems like I'm not. I'm just caught up with college right now but I'm so excited to see what happens!
    February 26th, 2011 at 10:21pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    You are seriously a B***H right now. But I love you anyway, for updating!!! I reallly love this story, ya know, so I can't wait for more from this or any of your others!!!

    Don't have time to leave an ultralong comment like usual, 'cause I gotta get up early and I still need a shower and it's getting closer to ten than it was five minutes ago...lol XD

    Until next time!!!
    February 26th, 2011 at 04:32am
  • Clarissa

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    Heart :D

    <3 Clarissa
    February 25th, 2011 at 07:21pm
  • Pieces.Of.Heaven.

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    YOU LIVE!!!!!!!!!

    welcome back! i hope this isnt a quick hello before you disappear again. I love this story and how far it has gone and i hope that now some inspiration has hit you in the head like a hummer going off!! :)
    of course if i have to wait forever again, i will, but just as painfully as i have this time....
    February 25th, 2011 at 10:59am