:D Your story is so awesome! I have been completely taken in by it, like a good book you just can't put down (only in this case, it's my lap top... XD) So basically, I've spent all of my christmas holidays reading this... it has been amazing however I would love it if you could write a story equally as amazing explaining to my teachers the reasons why I haven't done any school work... ;)
Okay. I've decided to write you a poem for inspiration and to spark a nerve in your brain that will cause you to write another chapter. :) ahem. Dear you, dear you, dear you, I really am quite sad, Because when I come here, There's nothing new, my lad.
I pace and pace and pace, wishing for sanity to come but all I can do is wait, I know I'm such a bum :/
But wait, oh wait- just wait! I've decided to write a poem To help you in your time of need (Nothing rhymes with poem.)
So here, I say here: If you don't write anymore, I'll tell you right now- I shall begone! No more.
I know- very sucky poem :) ah, well. I'm not a very good rhymer. BUT GOOD LUCK AND WRITE SOME MORE! -MelHailXD
Hahaha yeah it's pretty cool. I mean it has its ups and downs. But I like living an unconventional life. By the way, The Essence of Sin is really great. I love the writing!
My parents... um... there's not much to say about them. Yeah I miss them. But... I don't know it's complicated. School? Out of all of my boys only one of them graduated from high school, and I'm a senior. I dropped out my freshman year for two and a half years, but the boys... they said I was too smart for my own good. A few of them roped me into going to this weird alternative school where all we do is go camping and it's barely like going to school at all. Except we learn in really hands on out of the box ways. Anyway that's probably boring. My boys, they're all brilliant, a few of them are actually considered geniuses. They crack me up. And we're all total conspiracy theorists so... life is fun. Hahaha.
I'm not lying to you. I ran away when I was sixteen. I have seven brothers, but I only live with three of them and four of our friends. All boys. I'm kind of a bad kid. A trouble maker. Hahaha. Yeah, but now I live with them. It's really fun. Kind of a pain in the ass sometimes. Hahaha. Being the only girl is fun though. I don't know if I could handle another girl coming into our group. :) But yeah, it's super fun. It was annoying when I was younger and they were all WAY WAY over protective. Until I started dating my boyfriend, they wouldn't let anybody come near me who they didn't know. I'm serious. They're still WAY too over protective. Hahaha. It gets on my nerves sometimes. But oh well. :)
Naw... not that extreme. But I did runaway from home and now live with seven other guys. I wasn't five though. We don't rob banks... nothing that extreme. Mostly we pick pocket and steal stuff. I'd be lying if I didn't say it was fun. Also... I'm dating one of the guys I live with and he's four years older than me. So... it's similar. :)
ok, so it took me almost a week to read all of this story. i love it. it's well written and it is amazing! i was laughing sooooooo hard during some parts. as a plot idea is, caleb could be the head of the new gang or something. or shaun or rose. shaun would do something like that to get back at princess...... or at least i can see him doing that, anyway
Ohh pleeaase update this story more often! It's by far my favourite of yours but there's never new chapters. I feel sorry for Kara, because even though she wants Caleb she's still in love with Jared. Honestly, I think she should be with Caleb because he seems like he wants the best for her. And does she still dress like a hobo? Cause that's naasty, especially in a house with guys ;D
Oh, goodness! Well, for starters, I absolutely l.o.v.e. Jared. However, I'd feel super bad for Caleb if he came back and Kara was with Jared :/ so maybe, Caleb can do something horrendous so that Kara doesn't feel so bad about it :) lol just an idea. And I totally go with the flow on my stories too. I haven't finished one to this day haha.
Remember what happened last time? (Or at least one time?)
I love this story so far (don't me wrong, I've told you once and I'll tell you again that I like GR better XD) and can't wait to see where you go with it.