The Last Goodbye - Comments

So I just started reading your story, and I love it so far!

Did you watch the game last night?! Now, if you knew me, you'd know I'm a HUGE Kaner fan, and when he scored the STANLEY CUP winning goal, I fucking flipped out.

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That was a very cute ending. :) I loved it. :) and Raylene and Adam are adorable :)

Yay!
I for one am happy because I was rooting for those couples since the halfway point of the story.
I'm going to miss this.
I really liked it!
<3

Awww that ending was terrible at all it was really cute :D
it's sad that this story has to end but at least it had a happy ending for all.
Sorry for not commenting earlier, I've been so caught up with everything.
When I read the before last chapter, when Raylene rejected Patrick I was really anxious to see where al that would end up.
XD Delaney and Patrick on a reality show together would have been hilarious.
I'm really glad I found this story it was awesome and I hope you keep up the good work :D

Patrick and Delaney walked through the house, hand-in-hand. Patrick was more than happy to finally be moving out of the house and back into his apartment once again. They walked into the living room, and both immediately stopped in their tracks, seeing Adam and Raylene on the couch, looking awfully comfy with each other. “Well, you may not have been right for Raylene, but maybe another hockey player is,” Adam smirked.
Thumbs up x 1 million =]

“I wrote Raylene’s name down on every single one of the pieces. You were going to pick Raylene no matter which piece of paper you chose,” he admitted. “What? Why? I thought you had a thing for Raylene. Why make her the winner?” Patrick questioned. “I knew she’d be the only one to cooperate with the rest of my plan. Rosie and Kristalyn wouldn’t have. Rosie’s too much of a bitch to, and Kristalyn would have wanted you all to herself,” Adam explained.
His plan, or Erica's plan?? =]
Because, as much as I love Burish, there's no way he thought of that, haha.
But, GOOD...Team Pat/Delaney!

AND, the way you left it, you could write a sequel once you're done with my Filppula story ;)

That plan sounded to smart for Bur to do. Haha.
It was a cute ending.
Maybe another one with Delaney and Pat or Ray and Adam? :)
You did an extremely good job with this story.
I'm going to miss it.

AWWWWWW bad ending but hey they are together lol :)

AW, IT'S OVER!
Really, really good though.

"...she’s too good for you"
^ I love, love, love that, aha.

I don't hate you for the couples, I still think it's cute although I would have liked a different pairing ;D

Very nice though, great work on the story :D

Oh no :( I have a feeling she is going to get fired D: please update soon!

Oh no, what's going to happen with Pat and Delaney????? I can't wait for the conclusion. It's been so good the whole way. I'm sorry you had a bad day.

Awwww I hope your days better and I loved it by the way

Oh snap.
Props to Raylene for saying no to Pattycakes.
We all know they weren't meant to be.
Hopefully things work out between him & Delaney, though.
I'm sad this will be ending.

Oops, commented twice, somehow. Oh well

First off, cheer up charlie. Secondly, this chapter was really good. So glad Raylene didn't try and fake the relationship in the end. Aw...I'm missing it already. Can't wait for the final chapter.

First off, cheer up charlie. Secondly, this chapter was really good. So glad Raylene didn't try and fake the relationship in the end. Aw...I'm missing it already. Can't wait for the final chapter.

I won't hate you if you update. soon. :)
Please. :)
I wanna see what happeneds!

As the day went on, Patrick couldn’t help but feel sort of like an outsider. Adam had immediately clicked with Raylene’s friends, while Patrick stood off towards the side. It was at times like these when Patrick wondered if Adam liked Raylene in more than a friendly way. He saw the way he looked at her and the way he laughed with her, and he knew there was something there.
I approve! =]

If Adam really did like Raylene, should he just let his friend have her?
Yes, because you have Delaney ;)

He had thought he had it all figured out, but now it was apparent to him that he didn’t. “Pat, do you want to tell us who you chose?” he heard Adam’s voice, pulling him out of his thoughts.
*cough*Delaney*cough*

Yes, Raylene turned him down! =]

Patrick turned towards Delaney, only to see her staring at her boss, who was looking at her with a deathly glare. Patrick knew Raylene was only trying to help, but he had a feeling that she had made things even worse between Delaney and himself, if that was even possible.
It had better not be possible. *sends deathly glare to you* =]

I'm sorry you day was so terrible :(

But oh snap!!!!!! I hope that Delaney doesn't get like serioulsy pissed or anything, but she probably will. And now Adam and Raylene can be together!!!!!!! ;) haha Love it

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Aw, you ahd a bad day? That's horrible, I hope things get better! :) :)

Oooh, Raylene, that "no" was intense..just sayin'...

ONLY ONE CHAPTER LEFT!? Aww :(

Can't wait to read the last chapter though...and see how everything works out! :D