January 3rd, 2010 at 01:10am
I feel like I always tell you that you're writing is perfect and since you've probably got the point by now I'm not gonna mention it. :P (But it is xD) Uhm...I do not know what to say about this story except that it made me sad and sort of angry. Some people never change...
I do very much enjoy your writing style because it gets the point through so easily without necessarily saying it.
:) You're an awesome writer!
this was very well-written and very realistic too. It felt like poor Martin was really going through this. once again, congratulations.
we need more crashdiet fans here...