Hurricane Drunk - Comments

I actually adore this, I can't believe I took so long to read it. :0

I've never read anything like this before, it's so wonderfully done. You're a master at writing dialogue, my darling. I can build up a picture just from the drunken ramblings - which, by the way, nailed the songfic. You've done Florence proud :D

& Edie reminds me slightly of myself

Great job, oh wonderous one. Good luck in the contest - not that you need it.

I love the style of this piece, it's so original, and a really good way of getting all the drama across. The fact that it is just dialouge is even better - I can picture it so clearly and it's just from the main character speaking.

Dylan And Edie - You haven't happened to read the diary of a crush books have you?

This amused me to no end, I absolutely adore it.

Job well done - I hope you win x

That was amazing.

I smiled all the way through that, and the way she talked just made me giggle. You portrayed the feeling of drunkenness exactly. It's an unusual and interesting format that you've written it in - instead of no dialogue, it's all dialogue. You're a really talented writer and I myself didn't find any mahoosive spelling mistakes.

I just wrote "smelling" there and didn't realize until I read this comment over again. >.<

But yes. This was just a really funny, really interesting piece of work and I don't have a single bad thing to say about it.

Good luck in the contest. (:

I'm pretty sure this is one of my favourite pieces on here.
It made me laugh and smile.
It was hilarious and just amazing.
I loved it.

One Shot for One-Shot

Okay so I am officially in love with this! The form is so original, and the story cracks me up. You've got the description of a crazy drunk person down to an art.

I tried to find one part that was my favorite, but honestly, it's really hard. I honestly loved the entire thing.

The bit about the umbrella was hilarious!

Good luck with the contest, with this story you'll definitely win.